I'm really diggin the piano bits on this. The beats are pretty cool too, though the beat boxin stuff seems a bit outta place or off, ya know? It'd be interesting to hear this with vocals, but at the same time I think that it does a pretty good job of standing on its own. Will def sav/fav, might mess with doin a remix of it too (will let ya know). Lates!
Nice lil shorty ya rolled here. Great bouncy quality goin on here. The only thing I'd recommend is maybe doing something with the female vocals (toning them down a bit or... I dunno, just wasn't really diggin 'em, ya know). The other thing would be to try n mess with this some more to make it longer (like expand on the end effected synths to make it be like a taking a breath before the bridge, where they rise & fade and ya bring back the drums). Lates!
The cash register is a creative touch man. Thats what I'm talking about. Makes me think of bills lol. Awesome work honestly. Gr8 track gotta fav dis.............
what is the meaning to life?
why cant I do it right?
who is behind the curtain?
why is life so uncertain?
why cant there be peace and equality?
why is all I see disease and poverty?
What do you mean I'm not the man you wanted
What do you mean They're not the kids you wanted
What do you mean this is not the house you wanted
What do you mean this is not the life you wanted
Thanks John, I like where you are going with that. Maybe something like.....
Why do I, try and try.
When am I not the guy?
Who do you love?
Whats with the shrugs?
Isn't this the life you made for yourself?
Don't you understand that we do need help?
What's with the kids, and why don't you care?
I guess I have one thing to share?
I'm done asking someone who pretends I'm not even there!
Yes sir...Diggin da new stuff bro... Ill drums as always and the feel of this is deep and chill... I like it... Sweet arrangment... Has a nice flow too. Who cares what genre it is as long as it sounds good and makes you feel good then it's all good bro :) Dem Oasis loops are coming together almost done with that track... can't wait to let you hear it. I hope you like it...Hope all is well with you and Fam... Respect... Rob :)
Always good to hear from you Rob. I'm glad you are feelin this track. I def can't wait to hear the new track with those loops. I was actually thinking about it the other day, curious how you'll lay that ish out. All is well with the family and myself. I have an interview tomorrow to become an electricians apprentice. So things are looking up. I hope all is well with you and your family. And all that stuff has worked itself out. Be easy bro.
Yeah, I don't know that I would call this hip hop, but whatever it is, it's pretty great. I like the samples, but I was really impressed with the drums here.
loving the track man. very unique. very unique and that's what i live and die by for music. loving the vibe. liked the beat so much i played it through and freestyled throughout the whole thing and i am definitely feeling this dude. kudos sir!!
Thanks Cheeve, If you'd like I could throw you this mp3 so maybe you could lay some ish over it. Written or freestyled doesnt matter to me. hit me up if your interested
i really like the lyrics man. "im just trying to reach all these eager listeners".. haha so true! the "along the way" after the first verse sounds awesome. your room mate really kills it on this track i think, great mc voice. it reminds me of a dude that did some tracks with 2pac..cant remember his name off top of my head. keep postin sick tunes man you got talent
Hey thanks alot bnb, Dusk was against Auto Tunes at first until I laid that 'along the way' down and he was convinced ha. and his favorite rapper for a long time was tupac, and he is very pleased with your review, as am i. Thanks again bnb, hope to hear from ya soon
Not bad brutha...I like it...This beat is dope and the vocals sound good man. You guy's harmonize well. Good break down and smooth transitions. I like during the break when you change up the drums a bit. The lyrics got meaning too...Good work guy's...Keep at it brutha...Blume:)
i listen to it en i think its not so bad ad all.
but i think the singing is not so good but the rap is muts beter
en mabby try to work it out some more try som more sounds in the track mabby it comes out more but i think you can make somthing of this work it out. well don keep it up
Thanks tobytaby, personally I love the beat the way it is. but I know we could work on the chorus, we originally meant for a women to sing it. but we the lack of women who wanted to sing, and the fact we wanted to wrap this track up we took a swing at it. thanks again for the review
Nice. Love the spooky keys, and the deep bass. Except for Dungbeatl's excellent advice on taking away the piano for a bit, or chopping it, and then bringing it back, I can't really think of any other way to improve this. So yeah - nice work.
Great job with the deep beats man. Somethin' I could definitely write to - just sittin' here I've got a melody and rhyme ideas. "Dreams" has a nice flow to it aswell. Keep doin' you!
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I'm really diggin the piano bits on this. The beats are pretty cool too, though the beat boxin stuff seems a bit outta place or off, ya know? It'd be interesting to hear this with vocals, but at the same time I think that it does a pretty good job of standing on its own. Will def sav/fav, might mess with doin a remix of it too (will let ya know). Lates!
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Nice lil shorty ya rolled here. Great bouncy quality goin on here. The only thing I'd recommend is maybe doing something with the female vocals (toning them down a bit or... I dunno, just wasn't really diggin 'em, ya know). The other thing would be to try n mess with this some more to make it longer (like expand on the end effected synths to make it be like a taking a breath before the bridge, where they rise & fade and ya bring back the drums). Lates!
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on Why by Heisenberg
why cant I do it right?
who is behind the curtain?
why is life so uncertain?
why cant there be peace and equality?
why is all I see disease and poverty?
on Why by Heisenberg
What do you mean I'm not the man you wanted
What do you mean They're not the kids you wanted
What do you mean this is not the house you wanted
What do you mean this is not the life you wanted
etc etc etc
Great track.
Looking forward to when you do the vocals
All The Best
John
Why do I, try and try.
When am I not the guy?
Who do you love?
Whats with the shrugs?
Isn't this the life you made for yourself?
Don't you understand that we do need help?
What's with the kids, and why don't you care?
I guess I have one thing to share?
I'm done asking someone who pretends I'm not even there!
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on Demagwan by Heisenberg
on Tribe Arrived by Heisenberg
-Tim
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bnb
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on Dreams (with vocals) by Heisenberg
on Dreams (with vocals) by Heisenberg
but i think the singing is not so good but the rap is muts beter
en mabby try to work it out some more try som more sounds in the track mabby it comes out more but i think you can make somthing of this work it out. well don keep it up
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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_TxOpKpqHlU
great work again!
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