nice man... its different, i like it..few tips snare could do with punchin up try a transient shaper or layering it with random samples n with that first beatbox bass (its cool) try and bring out the sub freqs with either an eq, multiband compressor or try a vst called sanford basstightener....its sick for chunkin sounds without bass freqs...only thing missin for me is sub, but chunk up that bprrrrr!!! n you'll have a sick little track
Hi mate, nice track with a good beat. I like the pads in the background I think they would sound even better if they were a bigger feature. Nice work anyhow.
thanx a lot mate for your feedback & ideas im greatful & i agree in some of the track it needs pushing forward on the pressure elements side of things but ive put this 1 down until i get( create ) the few missing samples also it will be totally rearanged in some form or fashion ,cause i kinda gotta few ideas i wanna introduce into it as well - anyway my friend " thanx 4 your time & support " ... peace out !!! Ricky
thanx mate & i agree , it could benefit from a film sample or a little vocal element ... im gonna get back to this at some point - when ive created the samples in mind & will probabley be rearranged to some degree ... so i will hit u back when its finished mate & maybe get your opinion then also !!! big UP & Respect !!!
yes mate - thanx for your reviews & when i get back to finishing this track i will def give you a shout ... i made this when i was having issues with my soundcard & pc & got so effd off that i put it down & left it alone cause of the compression on the sub levels ... but i will complete asap ... Ricky
This was nice!! I like the drums, very full soudning overall. Please check out my song "Keep It Movin" Im a teenage producer and I need all the reviews I can get!! Thanks :)
the track has some nice ideas in it... the drum track needs some layer in it even if it's just the kick...
the bassline is great but it does get a tiny bit mono tone... maybe your could change it up a bit...even if its just drop or raising the pitch in places...
once you've layered your drum track you can sidechain your bass through the compressor on your kick drum it would make your bass dip slightly thus not over powering your drum track.... it would make the track less muddy...
there are some really nice ideas here brother and I enjoyed the listen...
what you say is true my friend & ive kinda learnt how to use the affects on ,compression,chaining & adding more textures within duplication of low,mid & high levels in the subs,fx etc... in my defence this was created in my first year & ive only been creating music nearly 2 years & didnt have much of an idea then how to fix the issues u mentioned my friend but i like the track so i thought id share it on free DL ... ps ... ive lost a lot of files & samples due 2 pc issues & dont think i will get to finish stuff i made in the 1st year , anyway mate " thanx " also big UP for the advice , im always greatful for producers input & direction as im still learning techniques as all of us do daily in creation ... so peace out my friend ... Ricky
sweet mate - nice 1 for your honesty & time , its an old track i made on reason 4 , so i know its a bit repetative but after 2 mnths on my first ever use of a programme to create music , not to bad i think ... . ive only been creating for 2 years & im learning every day as are most of us ... again i thank you my friend & peace out ... Ricky
your drum machine work is very dynamic. the intro sounds like glass crystals. and then you bring in these snippets of fast frenetic drums - . this idea of bringing in at the intro, the elements, the hits, such as vocal hits, that you are going to use throughout, is very effective. the whole mood at the outset, with these frenetic hits coming in sporadically creates great tension, sense of apprehension. then when you commit to that hard drum groove for a while it is very welcome, interesting, intense. you've got a real unique thing going in many ways. good luck with it. midisparks
mate - thats how i would like to express my views in such fine detail ... describes exactly how i cannot in words, express as easily myself ... bigUP !!! Respect my friend & send me a few links if you like ... peace out ... Ricky
thanx my friend !!! im glad your feelin the vibe on this 1 - its not had that much attention yet ,,, im new to looperman so its a case of gettin myself known !!! " im on soundcloud.com - as - RJD1973 " if u wanna check out more from me mate ,,, eitherway - nice 1 for your support & feedback & big UP !!! Ricky
You got to work on the mix man, and breaks are a little weak and need some dynamics. what you should do is, instead of going all out and creating a song, try create powerful breaks by yourself without the help of drum loops. It'll help you realize the creativity, dynamic and importance of each instrument.
The drop is sick but overall it's too loud compared to the rest of the tune.
Keep at it mate,
Steve.
I don't know "Drum And Bass" genres, but I love the sound of the track. It kind of has a future feel to it on parts of the track. Great job on the track. It sounds the same on most part of the track, but that's ok.
sweet mate - thanx for your feedback . this track was a retro style roller with a new age twist & i havnt quite finished it yet but will do soon ... Respect ... Ricky
Creative sounds on this track! It's not what I usually think of when thinking of dubstep, but I really like it all the same! Cool samples! Good bass! Nice track new friend!
i thank you my friend - Respect & nice 1 for your feedback ... sometimes i just let things go where there going & end up different than i expected , as you well know in production of music - sometimes i end up with nothing that i started with & a totally different tune ... goin with the flow & adding our little touches of creativity ... big UP & peace out my friend ... Ricky
Nice drums and really cool atmosphere. I love it man! My only critism is on the vocals, these fl studio text speech is not from this time anymore. I dont know if you have the ability to record vocals yourself. If you can you should use something distorted on it. But big up for your arrangement. It is sounding really cool. Cheers - L'Erique
yes mate - thanx , i agree , this is an early track i made & the only 1 on fl studio , reason is my usual platform but i tried fl & this is what come out . so big UP my friend & nice 1 for your feedback ... Ricky
thanx mate - nice 1 for your feedback ... glad your feelin the vibe on this , im still cleaning up the finished track & be done soon ... Respect ... Ricky
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... nice 1 for your feedback & peace out !!!
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but ...
the track has some nice ideas in it... the drum track needs some layer in it even if it's just the kick...
the bassline is great but it does get a tiny bit mono tone... maybe your could change it up a bit...even if its just drop or raising the pitch in places...
once you've layered your drum track you can sidechain your bass through the compressor on your kick drum it would make your bass dip slightly thus not over powering your drum track.... it would make the track less muddy...
there are some really nice ideas here brother and I enjoyed the listen...
keep 'em coming
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i like the voice repeating and the deep heavy bass,
maybe not so many times repeated though
overall a great track
theFISHface
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John
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It's like progressive dubstep :D
I love it, nice job.
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The drop is sick but overall it's too loud compared to the rest of the tune.
Keep at it mate,
Steve.
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Keep it up, my friend.
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Super job
John