I think you have mad a good effort. U have a good understanding of how to put this type of track together. I think the levels could do with a bit of a tweak and maybe a slight de-clutter in places. Overall I like it tho. The main piano loop is really nice and sets the mood for the whole track.
This is a very beautiful piece. It flows well from section to section. I hope you consider a career in music production. You are very talented for any age let alone 13! Thank you for the dl.
I LOVE DAFT PUNK!!!! you have made my day!!!! thank you gr8 french house track!!! also, it sounds like the early days of daft punk back when Thomas Bangalter and Guy manuel had seperate projects they worked on. you might like some of Thomas Bangalters songs to.
lol, this comment put a smile on my face, thanks bro. I'm honestly not into Daft Punk that much but i'm glad you enjoyed the track. Have a good day :-)
yeah nice very nice the start was cool i like the use of the piano it has a good melodic flow but i would say that your drum loops are slightly low in the track but i love the concept of this and overall well done very classy indeed i must say fav'd keep them coming bro
Haha, this put a smile on my face, well done, it's a very nice track, the only thing I would suggest is that you take off the reverb on the other drums you added, but my drums sound nice, keep it up, it's almost a funky house Drum & Bass step.
Musically it's all there, the arrangement is ok, maybe the transitions in some parts are a little off but don't worry, for a 13 year old you've got plenty of time to work on your arrangements.
I like how you sped up the track into the Drum & Bass state as well, you've got nice ideas in this track, and the bassline is good too.
Just try to make sure you have at least 1 kick and snare that has no reverb and punches through the track.
One last thing, I admire and respect you for letting me know you used my loop, I don't mind if you don't say you used it unless oyu say "Oh, I made all of it myself" Lol.
Keep up the good work and if you want to collab sometime you let me know little guy and we'll see what we can come up with.
Thank you very much, your loop was a large part of the track :-)
I think it would be interesting to a Collab sometime...But I've never done one before so i'm not so sure how it's supposed to work, though...O.o...But i'll keep in mind ;-)
yeah mate only 13 yrs and you produce this tune damn fine dnb i would say though that your effects and pads are a bit loud maybe you should try turning these down slightly so the drum loops can shine through if you get my drift but as far as the overall structure i like very much the concept is there but those drum loops need to be heard any hows keep making these tunes great work i will check your fan page out i have a fan page as well on facebook any hows check back on you soon
Like I said before, this is my first DnB track so this has been a little bit of just an "experiment". But thanks for the advice and I will use it to improve future tracks.
ok its a happy song :) i like the sounds but i thinks mabby a little slow start if you no what i meen try to ad som more work it out more i think but not bad ad all for a 13 year old :)
Oh yeah man. This is sweet. Love the groove...and the offbeat hits which work really nice. Very well thought out arrangement...just 4 chords can go a long way if you know how to dress it right and you did. Cheers - Bilbozo
Your description is too hyped. This is more like a monologue man, you need to add some more sounds. Btw, dont explain how little you are, it makes people uninterested in your work, and also your name needs some fitting if you understand me
I understand...I just named it "Your Game" because it was the main theme of the vocals that I used to have in this song. And I understand that adults may not think that kids have good work. And I know that i'm not very good at descriptions for songs...But Monologue? I think I had plenty of samples running, but what I think is sometimes different from what someone else does. Thanks for the review anyway.
Agree with DjD, very good for a 13 year old. Accapella fits the beat nicely too, just need to beef up the drums a bit. Maybe try layering some of the hits with other samples, like 2 or 3 kicks layered over each other, same with the snare, but use all different samples. Doesn't work if you put copies of the same samples over each other. Also put a limiter on your output/master track. Then it won't distort when you layer your drums up, most dance producers have a limiter on there master track as standard.
Yeah I agree that it needed a little bit more variety and better percussion samples than the default FL Studio samples. I also wasn't really good at equalization at the time, so the kick wasn't as powerful (But I've improved with EQ'ing since then) I also removed a default limiter from the master track because the bass was, I guess "Choking" the other sounds out. Thanks for the review and i'll take the advice that you have given me. =-)
Wow. I wanna say something like "this is great for a 13 year old" but i cant. Cause' this is just plain great! A lot better than i could do at 13. If i had tried to make this three years ago it would have sounded like crap. Great Job! Keep up the good work!
Ha Ha, thanks man. I've been at this hobby for about a year and a half (but are inactive with the music production during school seasons) so I have to say I've gone a loongg way in such short time. Thanks for the compliment. =-)
Well really this isn't my very FIRST track ever created, I have plenty more earlier-made tracks in my archive and on soundcloud, this is just the first on Looperman. but i'm glad that you enjoyed the song. =-)
Beautiful work man.. Keep this up cause at age 18,19 or 20 you will get your self a recording deal. cause, for someone your age that's a brilliant track like zero says..
Hello, beautiful work. What I listen is that it's well balanced, no instrument dominate, the rythm and the voice get well together.
That's a very good song for a so young person like you. So, work hard your music lessons if you take them, and I feel you do beautiful creations. You have a certain notion of melodic building.
Nice!
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not too bad but still needs a bit of tweaking to be a banger.
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Musically it's all there, the arrangement is ok, maybe the transitions in some parts are a little off but don't worry, for a 13 year old you've got plenty of time to work on your arrangements.
I like how you sped up the track into the Drum & Bass state as well, you've got nice ideas in this track, and the bassline is good too.
Just try to make sure you have at least 1 kick and snare that has no reverb and punches through the track.
One last thing, I admire and respect you for letting me know you used my loop, I don't mind if you don't say you used it unless oyu say "Oh, I made all of it myself" Lol.
Keep up the good work and if you want to collab sometime you let me know little guy and we'll see what we can come up with.
Soligen
I think it would be interesting to a Collab sometime...But I've never done one before so i'm not so sure how it's supposed to work, though...O.o...But i'll keep in mind ;-)
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Like I said before, this is my first DnB track so this has been a little bit of just an "experiment". But thanks for the advice and I will use it to improve future tracks.
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I do think that I made the progression a little bit too long and repetitive but it's my first Drum-and-Bass song so go figure...
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Keep it up man.
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That's a very good song for a so young person like you. So, work hard your music lessons if you take them, and I feel you do beautiful creations. You have a certain notion of melodic building.
Nice!