riot19

eh the vocals dont work with tha beat, and that guitar totally clashes with those drums, if you want to try and recreate it I'd probly slow the tempo of tha guitar down er find different drums cuz I tryed the "re-listening" that Zoiielou said and it still didnt click in my head, but it was a good try... I downloaded that guitar a ways back and still cant fit it into any beat so dont sweat it so much, but yea hopefully I see some more stuff, keep at tha beats bro

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Keep at it mate, don't think the vocals and beat go on this tho.

Yeah I listened to this and was like 'noooo' but I re-listened and actually it's catchy, the melody is a bit messed up but the track behind the lyrics is pretty awesome. Good job (Y)