Ah, I heard these back to front. Yeah, I'd say you're definitely going in the right direction with the newer version, it's much better. But I would say the sound of that lone snare, the one that does most of the fills (in both versions) sounds very generic. Changing that to a more unique sound would increase the coolness factor.
Good work though dude, hope you do more industrial stuff soon.
I know that lone snare is a but of a composer cop out. It may get replaced with some dirty dirty FX I just need something at the time to pull it all together shall keep you all posted
Dude this is great. Doesn't need vox, interesting enough without them. Harsh enough to be harsh yet mellow enough to chill to, a cool mix. I really enjoyed this.
hi hats 2 loud.maybe double the gits then eq them diff slightly.any vox? the way it flows is cool.loud then quietish.
p.s. like the avatar.makes me thirsty
This is very cool! I like the glitched out drums a lot! Did you play that guitar yourself? It's got a nice tone for industrial music. I don't really have any suggestions as to what to do with this song, except maybe to add some vocals or something...but it's good the way it is. Nice work!
Yes that is my own guitar just through a boss muti effects peddle. I've given a copy of this track to a friend of mine to see if he can come up with some lyrics. Which could give me a better idea if what the structure is going to be. I maybe posting some of the loops from this. Thank you for your rating.
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Good work though dude, hope you do more industrial stuff soon.
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p.s. like the avatar.makes me thirsty
on Working Title 1 by geeus81