RitajustRita

Rita: I thought this was a great track. Your vocal really worked well with the beat. It definitely had a "Leonard Cohen" vibe to it, which is high praise - particularly coming from a Canadian! :) I agree with Manuela. Your singing has most definitely evolved and with this kind of track, you have found a "niche" that seems to fit very nicely.

Regards from Ottawa,

Eric

I meant the offer as purely a listener, my lady. Its a collection ive put together for that reason.

On a side note, I wanted to start mentioning to people that the Collab Album that Cyberflares and I had put alot of work into is finally finished, after unforseen delays. Its called The Lozerz Club, and its free to download from my Google Drive with a link. If you'd be interested in having it, LMK and ill email the link to you. Happy Music making.

Hello Rita - I'm happy to say that one of my favorite things to do here on LM is to listen to all the new stuff you have posted, u never disappoint :)
I have a Hybrid Beats collection that will be ready soon, as well as my annual Remix album. I'll send u a link for them when its time, if you'd like to have them.

Well done Rita, great track, it's a great beat to build your vocal on and well performed. Regarding the lyrics, I'm a "friend-less" survivor haha

It might not be your track but you make it your track vocals fitted well into the tune, The lyrics were good again well done rita i enjoyed my listen :)

Hello Rita
It was a beautiful message this one, and unfortunately it is almost common. My perception about friendship really changed after a reading of an old small book wrote by Alberto Moravia. It is called "Sette Raconti" in Italian, which means "Seven Stories". I believe you can find it in English or perhaps in Duch which is your native language. What I truly kept about friendship is this....you need a friend to be happy for you when you achieve your goals and life seems to give to you what you seek for, be it a nice family, or success, or welth, or health and beautiful dreams...It is so essential for a person to be of help in our hard moments of life but there is point and it is masterfuly explained to one of these little stories of Moravia.
We need companions in our lives and we first have to feel empathy. Perhaps this way we can share dreams and life.
You have worked well on this song. What was a bit difficult to listen to, was when you had to sing over those voices.
Anyhow, your vocals are to the point and I hope it made you feel better.
Best regards, Anthony

Mrs i think your voice and delivery have improved so much, there's alot of confidence in your vocals now because i think you now believe you can do it, and you do it justice alright and as long as your not making commercial from the YouTube track its fair game to be used i've used loads before, but i separate all the stems and add my own FX etc, if you ever got a break on someone elses beat you just buy the licence or lease it anyway. as long as your enjoying yourself, thats the only important thing and LM has changed we lost loads after the update too, the days of everyone sharing ideas and giving constructive advice are gone and with it a lot of experience, nice work yet again

i like the way you convey the emotion of false friendship - I call them 'Fairweather Friends' - they want you when they are getting something out of you but when you want a reciprocal, fair share of energies, they disappear - it is disheartening but you learn not to give your energy away like salt and pepper intuitively and to recognise your worth through such experiences - as your song says, 'you were just lessons'. The softer voice you are using, highlights the irritation and that resigned 'yeh, whatever' feeling of knowing where you are at. A different and original subject matter and a great tune. Kay

We don't even who owns the beat, too, we love the song hehe. Beautiful piece, Rita. Loving that reverb...

What an excellent beat you choose Rita !!!! Your vocals are wonderful and are blended perfectly just like Dan wrote !!! Love it !! Cheerssssssssssss !!!

You found really nice beat. Your voice blended in it perfectly.
Good job! I love it!
Cheers!

hello Rita, i just seen this, i'm back about, its good to here my old mate still doing the business as i last heard only better, really well wrote and delivered track your voice is great Mrs, thats a hard as F@ck beat to go to so fair play to you we'll catch up proper

Particularly demanding music and I think you are so right there Rita !!! Bravo !!!! Great Vocals !!!! Cheerssssssssss !!

I admire the way you can sing with any beat - versatile!

I like it. Really nice singing on this track.
You lift this beat to another level.
Good job!
Cheers!

Yes, you have done an excellent work here Rita. I liked your interpretation, it is your offer, if I can use this word, to a melancholic trap beat. Your way is more lyrical but it is your approach to this widely spread music. Well done.
Best regards, Anthony

Hi there Rita, really good stuff with that nice signature style once again shining thru in this track....the beat itself is trap but you manage to make it work within your storyline and its pretty cool.....its great

Nice work on the track RitajustRita.

Great lyrics Rita :)

Hello Rita, this is great storytelling and matched by a well matched music accompaniment, your voice takes it even further in that style only you possess......its really good.

Lovely vocal, Rita

Rita - Oh my goodness - that beat with your vocal and lyrics - total communication of Borderline issues - Fire and Ice - brilliant songwriting and delivery! Kay

I really dig this! Superb track! Lyrics are emotional and touching!
Good job Rita!

I'm feeling this. Excellent track.

Nice work on the track RitajustRita.