wacky zany cosmic mad as a hatters tea party but i f#cking loved it meow. love the jews harp vibe nice reverb the beat is fire but this track made me smile most. you know how to put smiles on peoples faces Mrs, very creative your too cool for cats
That was a while ago, yes. But it's nice to see you here again every now and then. I'm glad I could make you laugh and that your cats responded too. Thank you for your kind words
Hello Mom, is that the little cat that sneaks down your street at night that you told me about? Funny song, but you should have sung something to him *Smile. Kind regards, I'll be off then. Manuela
Hi little one. No its not him. He just make loud miauws for his food and thats it lol. my sweet Tazzie would turn in his grave if I sang something to this cat. He was jealous of every other cat. If I sang something about or for a cat it would only be for Taz. I love him so much and I miss him so much. Even though it has been 4.5 years since he had to go.
Absolutely sick, really like the drums. Maybe the meows around the 1 min mark could be lowered a bit, but the last growl could be louder, maybe a sick reverb or delay effect. Whole track could easily be half the length. Otherwise, very cool, very like it.
Hi. Thanks for listening and compliment. I will definitely take your advice. That last cat is really cool, right? I'll turn that up louder and see how it sounds with a delay. The rest a bit softer. Yes, it has become a bit long because I left the middle part free of cat sounds so that someone can use it for rap or something and then not be bothered by meows.
I like how you took a mundane topic and made a song from it. I try to do that all the time, way more interesting than singing about a general topic like lost love, for instance. Good humor in it but the music isn't a happy tune, more serious and a bit dark, that cat was not happy, he.
Hi Wayne and thanks for listening. I'm glad you like it.
I'm not really the type to sing something like I miss you or I love you so much and I want you back blablabla
My text is short with words that I can pronounce reasonably well in English. in that short text I process my ideas, experiences and anger in just a few words lol The cat understands the disguised message and who it is addressed to and indeed does not like it hihihi.
You told me that you changed a few little things. Unfortunately, since I didn't download the previous version, I can't say right away what exactly you changed. But in the end that doesn't matter because the song is still very beautiful! I also have the problem sometimes that I don't like my voice because I think it sounds bad. Sometimes I imagine it, often it's actually the case. *Smile. Unfortunately, the voice is not a keyboard where you press a few keys and it sounds the same and good. Unfortunately, our voice depends on many factors, daily form, health, alcohol, nicotine, fatigue, stress, breathing... and much more. When I'm in production Commercial recordings or label production, then I need a long preparation with breathing, larynx and vocal exercises. I basically have to warm up, like when I'm doing sports. But even then, sometimes I feel like everything sounds different and bad, even when the technicians say it went great. It's probably the same with your singing. The recording sounds different than you imagined. But the listeners don't know your ideas and think your singing is great. This is called subjective perception. Ultimately, the artist survives on the applause. Or?
Hey little one. I only removed 2 choruses that I thought sounded out of tune. On the one hand, it is good to hear that your singing is also determined by various factors. So there is still a little hope for me, but not much because my breathing will not get better. But I am happy that I can use my voice a little on my own beats and it gives me a lot of pleasure to do it and the compliments and stimulation here on LM certainly do me good.
my Mrs here on the loop, i married the right one musically fantastic progression Rita this is a step up a full track just you, im extremely proud of you, i also really feel you, it becomes a bug your confidence grows and you want to sing on everything i got that, you are the bravest woman on the loop well loved and respected you play a big part in our community like Manuela, ive told you many times YOU dont need to hide. p.s. check your private little gift for you x
Hi Paul. That is a sweet gift en sweet words from my Lm buddy....o wait...are we mussically married?? The gift was the musical commitment ring hahahaha. Now you're stuck with me and you won't get rid of me that easily. But things will go well between us because we have the same hobby. We motivate each other and grow together. What else could go wrong uhmmm???
But seriously Paul. You are always so enthusiastic and persistent ability and a lot of courage and you tries to convey that to me, which in turn really stimulates me to have more courage and to continue practicing my voice.
Hello Mom, I've always said don't hide your voice! And as you can probably hear from the reactions of others here, I was right. But now about your song. You have a nice basic rhythm. The other instruments are used sparingly and unobtrusively. It's somewhat reminiscent of the Talking Heads' older songs. I like it! The mix is good. You can tell from your singing that you're having fun working on this song. You're also becoming more and more confident when singing, and it shows. There are a few places where you hesitate a little bit when singing. But things are going to be different. Maybe it will help you to record each verse and each chorus dry individually. Then you have the opportunity to vary your vocals even more without having to record everything again and again and you can then highlight individual blocks with different effects. So work with multiple vocal tracks. Nice song. Kind regards, Manuela
Hi little one and thank you so much for the compliment and explanation Actually, I record everything at different heights and then see later which note fits best together or I put higher and lower ones together. Later I find out that not everything was recorded correctly and I make a new recording. And there is my problem. My voice sounds different with every recording. This could be due to self-confidence ,whether I am alone in the house or afraid that my neighbors will hear me or if I smoked too much lol. etc etc. And my English pronunciation is sometimes so bad that everything has to be repeated again. But I really enjoy doing it. You and Angelus and some other ladies here at lm have a naturally beautiful voice and a lot of experience. I am very realistic that I will never be a singer but I never knew that my voice could still be used in this way on my own beats. What I find strange is that my voice can sometimes sound so different naturally. Sometimes it sounds very warm and soft. Then cold and clear again or it sounds terrible. Do you have that too? Or is that just me and my mood at that moment. Could you practice always having the same voice?
MEOOWW! you go girl! & yes! your voice as I said before is so compelling & lovely! you have such a nice tone. Keep practicing/singing...before long you'll be singing like a pro because like I said before you can actually hold a tune but give yourself credit for being brave enough to do it. I like what I'm hearing here you are very creative! Brilliant! Work on the track indeed!
Thank you so much again Angelus. I also think it's brave of me hahaha And I will definitely try my best to improve and hopefully also with mixing my voice into the beat.
Yo CC. In Dutch we say that in streetlanguage to coward. Ofcourse i know some English but just the simple words. I have to translate the more difficult words and my pronunciation is poor. yes I am practicing my voice. I always asked myself how a singer... could make a tone and tune with a voice on a beat. That is quite difficult, but I am also trying that out. It would be easier for me in Dutch as far as lyrics are concerned, but I still prefer English.
Love the instrument choice and just the vibe of the track overall. The flow is there 100%. Love how u inquest it feels even a bit into the song. Probably due to the arranging (which is very good)
The intro & ending sounds like something I would do. Love the break @ 1;16. This has an early electronic darkwave kinda feel to it yet still a bit happy. Great job Rita.
YOU know I admire your music very much. And I am certainly happy with your compliment. Let's just say it's a beginning lol. As soon as I have my other computer in order, I can download more plugins and definitely try out the plugins you wrote to me. And then...and then...hahahaha But that will take a lot of time, so no competition for you for a while yet lol.
Hi Wayne Im glad you like it. it's a style that takes some getting used to. Just like people have to get used to me lol If you take your time, you will find the weird more and more cool
Hello Mom, I wouldn't describe the sound as crazy. Solid drums, the effects, especially the wind and the rotor sound are well done and positioned. In my opinion, the song is a good basis for a rap or as film music. Kind regards, your daughter
Hey little one. It's always nice to hear from an experienced person that the song is good You always give your honest opinion, even if the track is not as good, you give constructive criticism that helps someone to make it better.
nice work Rita very different love that synth saw wave, great reverse riser drum beat is solid and i love that little siren drop great atmosphere love the rotor blade and ambient pad finish excellent creativity Mrs, wait till you here my latest, like you its different :))
Thanks Paul It was time for some crazy sounds again lol. Although I am not very satisfied with this one. It's certainly not one of my better tracks. But not much good is coming out of me and my daw at the moment. I'm curious about your track.
ein sehr schoener trance-orientierter, spaeter dann mehr und mehr in einen HipHop Rhytmus uebergehender Song. Die Stimme ist gut eingebracht und der Mix und das Mastering tadellos! Gefaellt mir sehr gut. Aber ich hoffe, deinen "anderen" Song hier auch hoeren zu koennen.
Hi little one I'm glad you like this track. About the other track...uhmmmm I don't know. I keep having trouble getting the volume of my voice right. It sounds OK through headphones, but too loud over the speakers.
nice creative work Rita, you are really stepping out with your own music and beats in a big way, your inspiring Mrs, great synth and drum and the treated vocal is cool. i need to start doing more with my own music and beats. im following in your footsteps and want to get away from using loops. i forgot to mention in my reply to you on my track that the music was a freebie, but like all freebies i use i alter them to suit. i change the bpm and EQ it to my liking . i did step out myself recently while you had a break. https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/242857 if you get a chance. this is all my own music and beat keep up this great work Rita your a great artist and producer and well supported and respected in the community
YES Mam Rita, this is some creative and versatile composing here. It's Hip Hop as well as soul, and RnB. I can hear Prince and even believe it or not Stevie w. In my opinion, very well arranged, and mixed. In between the verses I like the way you gave the music a chance to breathe. Had to fav it. PEACE. T576 OUT.
Hi sorry for the late reaction. Thanks for the compliment and fav. I think its nice when a beat can be used for different genres. But that happened by accident lol
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wacky zany cosmic mad as a hatters tea party but i f#cking loved it meow. love the jews harp vibe nice reverb the beat is fire but this track made me smile most. you know how to put smiles on peoples faces Mrs, very creative your too cool for cats
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I smiled all the way through this one. And I think my 2 cats liked it too. Thanks u being a treasure, Rita. It's been too long since I heard from u
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Hello Mom, is that the little cat that sneaks down your street at night that you told me about?
Funny song, but you should have sung something to him *Smile.
Kind regards, I'll be off then.
Manuela
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Absolutely sick, really like the drums.
Maybe the meows around the 1 min mark could be lowered a bit, but the last growl could be louder, maybe a sick reverb or delay effect. Whole track could easily be half the length.
Otherwise, very cool, very like it.
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I like how you took a mundane topic and made a song from it. I try to do that all the time, way more interesting than singing about a general topic like lost love, for instance. Good humor in it but the music isn't a happy tune, more serious and a bit dark, that cat was not happy, he.
Wayne
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Hello Mom,
You told me that you changed a few little things. Unfortunately, since I didn't download the previous version, I can't say right away what exactly you changed. But in the end that doesn't matter because the song is still very beautiful!
I also have the problem sometimes that I don't like my voice because I think it sounds bad. Sometimes I imagine it, often it's actually the case. *Smile. Unfortunately, the voice is not a keyboard where you press a few keys and it sounds the same and good. Unfortunately, our voice depends on many factors, daily form, health, alcohol, nicotine, fatigue, stress, breathing... and much more.
When I'm in production
Commercial recordings or label production, then I need a long preparation with breathing, larynx and vocal exercises. I basically have to warm up, like when I'm doing sports. But even then, sometimes I feel like everything sounds different and bad, even when the technicians say it went great.
It's probably the same with your singing. The recording sounds different than you imagined. But the listeners don't know your ideas and think your singing is great. This is called subjective perception. Ultimately, the artist survives on the applause. Or?
Kind regards, Manuela
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U Silly u make me laugh, over here that means the same thing coward. I was just trying to switch it up lol Meow!
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my Mrs here on the loop, i married the right one musically fantastic progression Rita this is a step up a full track just you, im extremely proud of you, i also really feel you, it becomes a bug your confidence grows and you want to sing on everything i got that, you are the bravest woman on the loop well loved and respected you play a big part in our community like Manuela, ive told you many times YOU dont need to hide.
p.s. check your private little gift for you x
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Hello Mom,
I've always said don't hide your voice! And as you can probably hear from the reactions of others here, I was right.
But now about your song. You have a nice basic rhythm. The other instruments are used sparingly and unobtrusively. It's somewhat reminiscent of the Talking Heads' older songs. I like it! The mix is good. You can tell from your singing that you're having fun working on this song. You're also becoming more and more confident when singing, and it shows. There are a few places where you hesitate a little bit when singing. But things are going to be different. Maybe it will help you to record each verse and each chorus dry individually. Then you have the opportunity to vary your vocals even more without having to record everything again and again and you can then highlight individual blocks with different effects. So work with multiple vocal tracks.
Nice song.
Kind regards, Manuela
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Hi Rita,
MEOOWW! you go girl! & yes! your voice as I said before is so compelling & lovely! you have such a nice tone. Keep practicing/singing...before long you'll be singing like a pro because like I said before you can actually hold a tune but give yourself credit for being brave enough to do it. I like what I'm hearing here you are very creative! Brilliant! Work on the track indeed!
Angelus
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Like a pussy cat or pussy doll? Lol hey DOPENESS I HEAR YOUR NEW STYLE! YOU! I LIKES, VERY CREATIVE! U KNOW ENGLISH HUH
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Love the instrument choice and just the vibe of the track overall. The flow is there 100%. Love how u inquest it feels even a bit into the song. Probably due to the arranging (which is very good)
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Hi Rita a solid push beat with a strong bass and chord progression..keep it going!
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The intro & ending sounds like something I would do. Love the break @ 1;16. This has an early electronic darkwave kinda feel to it yet still a bit happy. Great job Rita.
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It is a little weird but at the same time interestingly cool!
Wayne
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Hello Mom, I wouldn't describe the sound as crazy. Solid drums, the effects, especially the wind and the rotor sound are well done and positioned. In my opinion, the song is a good basis for a rap or as film music. Kind regards, your daughter
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nice work Rita very different love that synth saw wave, great
reverse riser drum beat is solid and i love that little siren drop great atmosphere love the rotor blade and ambient pad finish excellent creativity Mrs, wait till you here my latest, like you its different :))
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Hallo Mom,
ein sehr schoener trance-orientierter, spaeter dann mehr und mehr in einen HipHop Rhytmus uebergehender Song. Die Stimme ist gut eingebracht und der Mix und das Mastering tadellos! Gefaellt mir sehr gut. Aber ich hoffe, deinen "anderen" Song hier auch hoeren zu koennen.
Liebe Gruesse deine Tochter
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nice creative work Rita, you are really stepping out with your own music and beats in a big way, your inspiring Mrs, great synth and drum and the treated vocal is cool. i need to start doing more with my own music and beats. im following in your footsteps and want to get away from using loops.
i forgot to mention in my reply to you on my track that the music was a freebie, but like all freebies i use i alter them to suit. i change the bpm and EQ it to my liking . i did step out myself recently while you had a break.
https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/242857
if you get a chance. this is all my own music and beat
keep up this great work Rita your a great artist and producer and well supported and respected in the community
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Nice work on the track RitajustRita.
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I'm listening... and this is great!
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YES Mam Rita, this is some creative and versatile composing here. It's Hip Hop as well as soul, and RnB. I can hear Prince and even believe it or not Stevie w. In my opinion, very well arranged, and mixed. In between the verses I like the way you gave the music a chance to breathe. Had to fav it. PEACE. T576 OUT.
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I like the sound, it's cool and fresh :)
Creative for sure and the synth adds a great touch!
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Hey Rita,
great mix I especially like the reverse sound.
Have a nice weekend!
Greetings
Matthias
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Hello Mom,
a very experimental interesting song but well done. You did a good job with the bass, drums and FX. The ending a little abrupt but okay.
Greetings to your little one