Man, youve got talent. This is a really good track. I honestly think that this is how a trance track should sound. With the buildup, bass, kicks and arps. Also the sweeps are pretty cool.
But when you switch the two arp melodies over at 1:47, it just dosent really work, and im afraid that the second melody really... isnt that good. I do not hate this song though, it just needs a little bit of work that all.
I am not going all negative on you, I am pointing out the parts I think are good and the parts I think are bad. But to end on a positive note, I think you did well.
on Always in had by Tranxce
But when you switch the two arp melodies over at 1:47, it just dosent really work, and im afraid that the second melody really... isnt that good. I do not hate this song though, it just needs a little bit of work that all.
I am not going all negative on you, I am pointing out the parts I think are good and the parts I think are bad. But to end on a positive note, I think you did well.