Mokeone
Still pressed for time
Exchange, United States
Joined : 31st May 2006 - 19 years ago
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Other users have posted 206 comments on tracks by Mokeone
Other users have posted 206 comments on tracks by Mokeone
on Wadda Ya Call It by Mokeone
on Lounge About by Mokeone
on Lounge About by Mokeone
on Lounge About by Mokeone
on Lounge About by Mokeone
on Smooth Moves by Mokeone
on Lounge About by Mokeone
on Lounge About by Mokeone
on Lounge About by Mokeone
on Lounge About by Mokeone
on Lounge About by Mokeone
on Lounge About by Mokeone
on Lounge About by Mokeone
on Lounge About by Mokeone
on Smooth Moves by Mokeone
JazzIs, cool
on Lounge About by Mokeone
on Lounge About by Mokeone
on Lounge About by Mokeone
this is very fine song, relaxing. to me from about 1:17 strings in the background are clashing with lower piano notes. there is no harmonic clashings of course but kind of overall mix 'overpower' happening. The sound is simply too fat (at least to me haha). It is good to somehow separate the layers to find the proper frequency range for each instrument inside the mix by equalizing instruments and analize the proper amount of reverb of them etc. That low acid bass that you are using seems to generate a kind of a distortion at places. synth melodies (from 1:56 and later along the track) are sweet and nicely played.
again overall this is very nice song but you may always consider adding drums and re-organize the material (to me there is not so much of space here regarding to the repetitive nature of this song). hope some of this is useful anyway...
I enjoyed listening. it is a favourite track of mine.
Greetings, Alex
on Lounge About by Mokeone
on Hard Road Ahead by Mokeone
0:18 plucked strings are pretty nice. Good feel to them.
Afterward is a darker, less positive line.
0:48 Similar guitar line that sounds rather good, followed by more of the odd riff.
At the 2:00 mark, your cymbal cuts off unnaturally. You then reverse the same drum line, and have it come back into the forward drums. Nice idea. Could probably be done to sound more natural, but it's not bad!
I would add more, but you didn't, so I shall stop here. As said before, more parts and more time spent on the drums would benefit this track, but it's still pretty solid!
Take care
Evan
on Hard Road Ahead by Mokeone
Guitar chords and harmonies reminds me a Hungarian alt/rock band: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qBDwLLy_CXw
Get some bass for it and 1 more part and this will be a winner...but I still like in this state too...
Handshake, Danke
on 2 left beat by Mokeone
on 2 left beat by Mokeone
on down the rabbit hole by Mokeone
on down the rabbit hole by Mokeone