Jalyn
bout to put some new song
With K-Mac BIT*HES, United States
Joined : 21st Nov 2009 - 16 years ago
Comments on Jalyn tracks
Other users have posted 125 comments on tracks by Jalyn
Other users have posted 125 comments on tracks by Jalyn
on AHH by Jalyn
on Pop/ r&b Ballad by Jalyn
i though that the heavy synth came in a bit strong and loud mayb turn it down a bit? and at 2:17 when the percussion comes back in it sounds like it was unmuted rather than just started cause it doesn't start at the right beat.
but overall amazing stuff!! :)
aelfo
on Smilies by Jalyn
but I also feel the synth is too loud and drowns the other instruments out (especially the drums)
on Slow Pop Instrumental! by Jalyn
on Pop/ r&b Ballad by Jalyn
on IDK by Jalyn
on Real by Jalyn
Cheers
French Kid
on Aching Pain by Jalyn
Great work
Cheers
French Kid
on Feeling Me by Jalyn
on Aching Pain by Jalyn
on Real by Jalyn
Why not adding a suave woman voice, a smooth and sexy voice . It'll give a real and besutiful melody.
Don't hesitate to try different tones (why not a 2 or 3 voices melody). You have here something you HAVE TO complete !!
Good work
on Aching Pain by Jalyn
It' could be good, but your mastering seems to be reviewed.
THe quality of the sound make destroying your production. Even if the melody is sympathitice, make care to the arrangement, the levels of each instrument.
I always write that a good music doesn't need heavy noise.
Can you understant this ?
If you apply some corrections, modifications, you'll discover your music again.
good job!
on Feeling Me by Jalyn
Good composition.
BUT (I often use 'BUT'), because of the duration of your music, you can introduce some rupts to break a coming monotony, with short drums sequences or somethin else, and afte, re-running your tempo and your melody.
It makes me thinking to the Californian period (1970').
It's a good music
on Feeling Me by Jalyn
on Smilies by Jalyn
on Real by Jalyn
on Aching Pain by Jalyn
on Real by Jalyn
on IDK by Jalyn
on Pop/ r&b Ballad by Jalyn
on Soft Party by Jalyn
on Lets Funk! by Jalyn
on Pop/ r&b Ballad by Jalyn
on Electro Dreams REMAKE by Jalyn
on Slow Pop Instrumental! by Jalyn