Jalyn

bout to put some new song

With K-Mac BIT*HES, United States

Joined : 21st Nov 2009 - 16 years ago

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Other users have posted 125 comments on tracks by Jalyn

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ImproveWithError 4th Mar 2011 20:11 - 14 years ago

on I Love You by Jalyn

I like the music to this track, has a unique sound to it. The vocals are too loud for the music, also they could use some reverb to help them sit in the track better. Probably wouldn't hurt to eq a little as well to take off the low end a little. Just a thought though, any way keep it up.

JohnBoutilier 4th Mar 2011 05:25 - 14 years ago

on Team Breezy by Jalyn

I think what you have here is quite good, but as with the last track I reviewed, the vocals seem too distant from the backing track, imo :-) I think a little mastering with help the piece a lot (not that I'm an expert or anything, lol, just my opinion.

All The Best

John

BigFaceInc23 13th Feb 2011 03:34 - 14 years ago

on Feeling Me by Jalyn

THIS A NICE RNB FEEL I REALLY LIKE THIS 1 NICE QUALITY AND ITS NOT 2 LOUD OR LO NICE TRACK.

BigFaceInc23 13th Feb 2011 03:24 - 14 years ago

on Slow Pop Instrumental! by Jalyn

NICE TRACK.I LIKE THE PIANO'S AND STRINGS.BOUT FOR THE MOST PART I LIKE HOW IT START OFF THEN U BRING THE KICKS IN NICELY ALL IN 1 NICE TRACK!

Prov3rb 10th Feb 2011 16:40 - 14 years ago

on Great God by Jalyn

Amen, Sang it girl!!!

Jalyn replied Unknown

Thank You! :)

06BentonMcKenzie06 31st Jan 2011 03:02 - 14 years ago

on Great God by Jalyn

That What Up Sing Praises. You Made That A Song?

Jalyn replied Unknown

Not really. idk if you Paula DeAnda but she has this song called "Good Girl' and i changed up some of the words and BAM! Came This song. you can youtube that song tho if you wanna hear the real verion.

DJFredrick 30th Jan 2011 23:44 - 14 years ago

on You Bring Me Down by Jalyn

Great vocal! amazing voice! I don't think you needed that many effects cause you have a wonderful voice on your own! Nice work with this!

Jalyn replied Unknown

Thank You Sooo Much!!! =]

DJFredrick 30th Jan 2011 23:23 - 14 years ago

on Dreams by Jalyn

I like the beat and the sound of it. Very Kanye style. The rapping was recorded in really bad quality and too muffled. Killed the flow of it. could be really good tho! nice work

Jalyn replied Unknown

I Know the quality is bad. i need to record it again and Thank you!! =]

new5ense 15th Jan 2011 23:40 - 14 years ago

on Im Me by Jalyn

ya good job puttin that together u can make some tight beats just usin loops

Mallygee 8th Jan 2011 19:37 - 14 years ago

on Electro Dreams REMAKE by Jalyn

send me the track wit no drums so i can freak that babe.

DJSchmeeJ 30th Dec 2010 12:03 - 14 years ago

on Soft Party by Jalyn

I love this Girl! The flow is so spot on! This is VERY good! The levels are a bit off though, cause the lead synth sounds like its clipping... and it too dominating in the track. One things I like to experiment with (I use reason 4) is creating another Bass device and drag that lead track into it and see what it sounds like as a hard bass. You should be proud of this.

BlaqhstarrMusic 29th Dec 2010 05:20 - 14 years ago

on Pop/ r&b Ballad by Jalyn

As far as arrangement goes it was on point. Now the mix is kinda off in my opinion.Those chorus synths are way too loud and its drowning out the other instruments. Just bring the synth down a bit and the track will sound a lot cleaner.

new5ense 29th Dec 2010 00:18 - 14 years ago

on Slow Pop Instrumental! by Jalyn

lovely track let me know when u drop the vocals on this

C3RT1F13DB3AST 27th Dec 2010 17:32 - 14 years ago

on Pop/ r&b Ballad by Jalyn

whats up ma. um loving dis beat. you did your thang. keep it up. you inspired me to post more of my beats. finally found good competition.

Jalyn replied Unknown

Thank You SOOO Much! =]

djzee86 13th Dec 2010 03:22 - 14 years ago

on Sunshine by Jalyn

hey i love yer voice i would like to work with u on a track i mean if u r intreasted?? here is my email address hit me up and we will go from there ok? adamsw29@yahoo.com cant wait to be able to work with u lol, one.. dj.zee

JohnBoutilier 12th Dec 2010 00:59 - 14 years ago

on Sunshine by Jalyn

Very pretty. Love your voice. Are you going to add any instrumentation?

All The Best

John

ljshadow 25th Nov 2010 16:16 - 15 years ago

on Smilies by Jalyn

i like this. my advice is once you make your music and master. burn it on cd. then go play it in car if it sounds like what it did on your instrument or how you wanted it to then cool... but most times the car audition is a good trick to hearing sounds that are too loud or too low. overall I like it. it has some inspiration in it.

RBmusic 13th Sep 2010 09:06 - 15 years ago

on Smooth by Jalyn

like it say nice and smoooth nice ...keep the good work girl

BlaqhstarrMusic 10th Sep 2010 05:25 - 15 years ago

on Smilies by Jalyn

Nice arrangement Jalyn. The quality is good but the only problem is the levels. Turn down the synths a little bit so we can hear those drums. Me luv me some drums.lol

Reyer 7th Sep 2010 23:59 - 15 years ago

on Smooth by Jalyn

Love the feel. I think you used the loops better than I did! Love this slow jam you've created. Nice job!

EasyToEnvy 6th Sep 2010 21:16 - 15 years ago

on Smooth by Jalyn

i like it, kinda has an old r n b feel to it, keep it upp

ReignForte 4th Aug 2010 20:30 - 15 years ago

on Smilies by Jalyn

im feeling this track nice work!

MStokes 4th Aug 2010 15:48 - 15 years ago

on Mellow by Jalyn

idk either but it's irresistable

SpellJammer 16th Jul 2010 09:00 - 15 years ago

on Rain by Jalyn

Awesome track man. Great work.

King2Face 15th Jul 2010 05:54 - 15 years ago

on Rain by Jalyn

wooo ok ok its not a fluk you got skills i do my own beats but i think you might have to hook me up with one of these joints 9 0ut of 10 4real holla at me

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