I have about five years of guitar in me, unfortunately I was in an accident a year back and can't play anymore. I have had all these ideas for songs to play on guitar, but can't.
There is something about this song that just makes me feel ok about all this, there is such emotion in it, and it feels so personal. It's like that cliche'd line people say to there favorite artist; "It's like you wrote that song just for me." That's how I feel haha, good job, keep it up!!
-Angelus
--- I'd love to hear your opinion of my stuff if you have a min.
Hallo TaToe,
da du aus frankfurt kommst schreib ich dir mal auf deutsch ein review.
dein acoustic lied kingt sehr gut, gefühlvoll und harmonisch.
weiß nicht was ich sonst sagen soll. ich habe nichts zu bemängeln.
It wasnt too bad but I heard some timing issues. Im sure you are working those out. I too wanted to hear more. Hopefully you will have a full song soon.
The clip was kinda short to see where it was going, just as it started to change gears, it faded out. I wanted to hear more at that point,haha.
I'm assuming the majority of the clip was the "intro" and the change is where the "verse" part started. For never having done this genre before it was alright. The intro(IMHO), seemed a bit like it needed to be worked out a bit more, things seemed to compete against each other, maybe get the drums to sync up a bit more with the guitars. I can't pinpoint it but someting sounds just a bit off to me during that part.(maybe it's just my ears)
Overall I think your heading in a good direction with this. Look foward to hearing it complete!
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There is something about this song that just makes me feel ok about all this, there is such emotion in it, and it feels so personal. It's like that cliche'd line people say to there favorite artist; "It's like you wrote that song just for me." That's how I feel haha, good job, keep it up!!
-Angelus
--- I'd love to hear your opinion of my stuff if you have a min.
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wow, einfach nur hammer der track, mehr bleibt nicht zu sagen!
peace Fabse
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da du aus frankfurt kommst schreib ich dir mal auf deutsch ein review.
dein acoustic lied kingt sehr gut, gefühlvoll und harmonisch.
weiß nicht was ich sonst sagen soll. ich habe nichts zu bemängeln.
grüße aus heilbronn
Fabse
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I'm assuming the majority of the clip was the "intro" and the change is where the "verse" part started. For never having done this genre before it was alright. The intro(IMHO), seemed a bit like it needed to be worked out a bit more, things seemed to compete against each other, maybe get the drums to sync up a bit more with the guitars. I can't pinpoint it but someting sounds just a bit off to me during that part.(maybe it's just my ears)
Overall I think your heading in a good direction with this. Look foward to hearing it complete!
Wayne, the humps