Elessar

nice more like it wow a lot can happen in 7years lol.. Nice clean kick and BASS.. vocal mangling a bit much but back then that was the fad.. nice production raelly nice quality sounds like a pre-master.. first fav from my fav genre ;)

back to the drawing board mate, this has potential seems like you rushed it though.. Good Tracks take time like most art. the kick is pretty psyish, everything else is just mudded down cant really tell.. advice try again dont be satisfied till you hear that ya now similarity like most pro tracks, don't have to be mastered great just get the mixing down right, good luck.