DynamiteSkye

Good stuff here, you really have the track ready. You could easily extend it to a full song.
Best regards, Anthony

Bump the levels up on your voice, extend track and add an extra change - generally a lovely track with some really good tones in your voice

Great vocals man.

I like it.... Although your vocals get lost in the bass, it's quite a good start!

LovePeace&Light,

Mykael

Hi yeah this is a good start to the track. Not sure why it ends where it ends as it sounds like it is just about to progress and then it just finishes. I'm not mad on autotune if I'm honest so if that can be removed that'd help as well. Is this still a rough draft after 3 years??

Sounds good. Nice work so fare. But i think you stopped working on it? Almost 2 and a half years later the same demo and question ......
As Wayne said - remove the auto tune and finish the song and all is good :)

stay tuned
joe

What software are you using for the recording and mixing?

Waiting for the whole song!

It sounds godd, good job!

I must agree with the others who have commented so far, it's pretty darn good for a rough draft. The mix is powerful and I think your vocals sound fine. Although I'm not much a fan of autotune, within the context of the music it works well.

Look forward to hearing the entire song!

Wayne

Yes, good lyrics and the track is decent. Stay with through the end and let us hear the final.

Ronabo

Omg you need to finish this because its so bloody good :)

Steve

Hey DSkye.
Just going by what you have uploaded, it's sounding pretty slick for a demo. I don't really like commenting on other peoples lyrics but it sounds like you are feeling what you sing and that's what is important.
As Danke said, there feels like there is a drop coming.
I look forward to hearing more.

TA

yes, it's pretty cool for the rough draft...hope it wasn't uploaded from the start of the song, cause there is a popp (or I donno in English, a little disturbing noise...:-) but later, this is cool...almost professional...great use of the autotune on the vocs (was that you?) and great breaks...hope that later comes the bumm, I mean the chorus with the peak of the song...:-)

anyway, congrats and handshake, Danke

I'm going down your track of songs seething with jealousy. I'l never sing again haha. Your sound is really pro!!!

MUST READ:
Hey I just downloaded your song and it's really,I mean really good,so I will post it on my youtube channel,and I want to make a music video for it,so how is this sound 4 you:You and me work together,you make me songs,I post it on youtube,make music videos and u become popular?

Sweet song i used it for a mashup

Proper.

That's officially a record.. favourited within 30 seconds. What an opening. The bass is awesome meaty and deep just the way I like it. In my opinion this is going to be timeless. Your sister must be over the moon that she inspired this. Production is tight. What more could you want from a pop song. Class job.

I've been thinking about some ''more'' lyrics.
And i've maybe some, if u need,?
Your a Fantastic Singer, Maybe once go to a Disco and tell the DJ, you've got a song for him, My nephew did that , and is now a ''popular'' Singer.

Answer if u need the lyrics?

hot track oh yea this needs to be promoted

Good job man, I as said in the first review you did a good job on this.

sounds good mikey! keep it up! =]