DynamiteSkye

Good stuff here, you really have the track ready. You could easily extend it to a full song.
Best regards, Anthony

Bump the levels up on your voice, extend track and add an extra change - generally a lovely track with some really good tones in your voice

Great vocals man.

I like it.... Although your vocals get lost in the bass, it's quite a good start!

LovePeace&Light,

Mykael

Hi yeah this is a good start to the track. Not sure why it ends where it ends as it sounds like it is just about to progress and then it just finishes. I'm not mad on autotune if I'm honest so if that can be removed that'd help as well. Is this still a rough draft after 3 years??

Sounds good. Nice work so fare. But i think you stopped working on it? Almost 2 and a half years later the same demo and question ......
As Wayne said - remove the auto tune and finish the song and all is good :)

stay tuned
joe

What software are you using for the recording and mixing?

Waiting for the whole song!

It sounds godd, good job!

I must agree with the others who have commented so far, it's pretty darn good for a rough draft. The mix is powerful and I think your vocals sound fine. Although I'm not much a fan of autotune, within the context of the music it works well.

Look forward to hearing the entire song!

Wayne

Yes, good lyrics and the track is decent. Stay with through the end and let us hear the final.

Ronabo

Omg you need to finish this because its so bloody good :)

Steve

Hey DSkye.
Just going by what you have uploaded, it's sounding pretty slick for a demo. I don't really like commenting on other peoples lyrics but it sounds like you are feeling what you sing and that's what is important.
As Danke said, there feels like there is a drop coming.
I look forward to hearing more.

TA

yes, it's pretty cool for the rough draft...hope it wasn't uploaded from the start of the song, cause there is a popp (or I donno in English, a little disturbing noise...:-) but later, this is cool...almost professional...great use of the autotune on the vocs (was that you?) and great breaks...hope that later comes the bumm, I mean the chorus with the peak of the song...:-)

anyway, congrats and handshake, Danke

This is really great but i have a minor suggestion that you may take into consideration (just constructive criticism- no harm intended) 1. The main drop synth is very catchy but maybe boosting the mids a little more and giving it a more "stereo" effect would really give this track that extra oomph. Just a suggestion tho, great track overall. Keep up the good work!

Woah, just heard this now.... what happened? This song is amazing!

love the beat man ¡¡ Sounds really great ¡

Well done ¡

Love the buildup and drop at 0:37! Very nice man! Great vocals too!!!

hey man, nice work! Check Out My Tracks, I Think You'll Like Them!!

Well five years have gone by.
Did it play on the radio?
Did it open any doors for you?
Has your producer aquired a penthouse apartment in London yet?
Have you finished your next song yet?

wow ... from 2012 .. sounds nice , how about a 2017 upgrade ? sounds really nice

Smart.
Cool.
Pro.

The vocals sound maybe a little quiet but overall its a very good sounding track.

Love this!!!

Nice track you have made , sound very good ;D but the intro could be a little more intro haha sounds like more of a preview now. Also I have the feeling it's more house like but that doesn't matter ;d Keep up this work and hope you will be featured in a club ;)