BONEZONMARZ

Hello Bonezonmarz, just listened to your track and think its excellent....loved the vocals and music is a perfect match, its that good......wish it was twice as long. Its a great piece my friend.

Love the whole tune - Jazz Fusion, methinks ;)

Its fire!!!
We need this summer vibes on spotify)

Good composition, just needs to be mastered. Comes in to hard making it muffled. Use EQ and pull the bass down some.. What Daw do you use?

loved it ! good music compositon
https://on.soundcloud.com/GmKZAOzRtoGAAhE5KB

Nice flow and rhythmic parts, with an interesting musical theme.
Well done.
Best regards, Anthony

Beautiful and upbeat

Do not put pressure on yourself to make music! You need to enjoy process of making it. I have 25 years of experience in making music and i still have like 200 unfinished project. When you feel it you make it. Sometimes i don't have ideas for months, and sometimes i make 5 high quality songs in month or less.
From what i heard from you here on LM you are talented musician and you will come there, just don't give up. I like your tracks and this one is also very good. Keep em coming bro!! Cheers!

Hello Bonezonmarz, definitely further development, its a nice easy listening beat and ready for a bigger role......

I think this is really nice, super chill and almost reminds me of Final Fantasy menu music. I think you did a really great job with the percussion selection especially. The rimshot hits or what ever those are really hold it all down for me. Wonder what an additional bass grove might sound like weaving in and out on this. Nice stuff!
-BN -._.-

Nice intro. Drums sound cool. Is this the finsished track or are you adding more to it? It's got a really good vibe to it, lots of potential.

Thats actually pretty nice there buddy if you can add more to it. good job!!

I really like the tune

You did a good job on those drums - you have a nice voice, don't sto using it.

Interesting track - love the effects and the beat

Nice work. Had a nostalgic vibe to me. Interesting what u say. I've always thought your beats were top notch and always liked your voice too. Honest opinion tho, maybe you could try stretching out lyrically maybe. Might help. I'd encourage you to keep going tho, even just for the fun of self expression. Cheers Zoot

Nice beat and i cant belief your sad description about your rap lol.
Just do it.

very nice love the vibe !

I love these keys!

I love this beat. Very enjoyable to listen. Good job as always! Cheers!

Hello Bonezonmarz, i quite enjoyed this lofi track, the simplicity to some music is the whole beauty....this has it for me, good track my brother.

Very cool jazzy beat but the rhythm section is a too loud here on my humble opinion ... all in all, your talent shines through ...
fistbump,
Danke

Sophisticated, jazzy stuff here, with an excellent chord progression and a rich sound to make it truly beautiful. I only consider it a short sample of your work and I believe you should expand it to a full song. It is really good.
Best regards, Anthony.

I like the piano choards at the beginning. I think the bass is a bit to dominant in the mix, maybe you could lower it a bit. Good work

I can hear myself on this. This is a great vibe.