BONEZONMARZ

Heartfelt vocals and love the bass - do you have the lyrics?

Good job Bonez. Cool song. Nice vocal too.
You are very good in this genre.

Club banger man :) does have that daft punk feel well done :)

this is very cool man love the synth chords! need to finish this and throw a vocal on too! nice job bro

Great track here. You are very diverse!

Dude, what a lovely track! Backscatter said Daft Punk and that's a great shout. They'd be proud to have made this!

Fabulous tune all round

Wow! Now this is a real treat alright, superb! You definitely captured the Daft Punk/French House sound and vibe, this is excellent. It flows dreamy and all of the song elements play quite well together. It's got great balance, which is crucial that can make/break a track. From what I hear, I didn't pick up on any issues/problems and leave it as is! @Danke2026's suggested some female voice, I think that could be a nice to try sometime. Again, this is such a fire track, the execution was perfect, and don't change a thing!

What a fanastic music for a female voice ... back to those days ... :-)
fistbump,
Danke

love the chords bro

Amazing track. Cool vibe.
I like it!

Only 1 word.................EXCELLENT!

Mark

Sheer brilliance ... missed your voice in it for some contra effect against the female one ...
hats off,
Danke

Nice instrumentation and vox sounds v contemporary

Are these your own vocals? If so, you should definitely do more songs like this, you really shine on this one. You must've fixed the vocal mixing, because it sounds good to me. Well done!

Neat beat and melodies man and your vocals sit just fine love tthat bass :)

BONEZONMARZ! Yep I like it too. Im definitely loving that raspy saturation. That brings the flavor. The beat, you know you were feeling that. The vocals are sitting right where it should be.The slight delay on the exit is the cherry on the top! Keep it up youre in the zone!

Mark

Killer bass synth ...
cool track ...
hats off,
Danke

Hello Bonezonmarz, I do believe percussions are a little to much out front and take away from the vocals....I would back them down a bit...your vocals are great, should stand out a bit.

You have this gorgeous, smooth, satin, melodic voice and the music is beautiful. I just felt maybe music was a tad too loud against your voice - beautiful track

Man that chord progression is killer. The intro alone got me sold. The rest of the track kept taking it to the next level.
Enough respect, king!

Beat is fire, and you layed vocal nicely in there.
Good job!

Amazing voice man !!!! Great track overall !! Cheersssssssssss !

Hello Bonezonmarz, never forget my friend.....what you think is paramount and opinions can matter some, but its yours that stands out....when we start trying to please others is when we please ourselves the least. You make progress a little bit at a time, music is so wonderful that it will allow you a chance to improve each time out....keep working hard like you're doing, you're doing great....you have a great voice and should be heard....keep working brother.

I genually like your music bro. You have your specific style and i like it.
You also have nice vocal and i believe that if you continue to sing and produce music you can really grow to professional levels. I'm not commenting on just to comment, i stand by my words.
Cheers!