BONEZONMARZ

Babban aiki.

Hello Bonezonmarz, more good work my friend, nice beat .....has possibilities.

Great work again.

Lovely track, nice and relaxed. It might be even better tomorrow on a lazy Sunday :)

Hello Bonezonmarz, fine piece of music, it has potential still.....if you're so inclined, but good work bro.

really lovely song i like it

Really nice man! I feel like if you throw some trap like drums or something on it would maybe be pretty fire

good job bro, sounds good!

A beautiful song!
I love listening to it, but I agree with Kay, please make the song longer, let us enjoy it for a few more minutes.
Good job.
Best regards, Juan Carlos

Yes this is great.

smooth track bro

You absolutely smashed it - this is the best I have heard from you I honestly didn't want it to end - so much emotion came through your voice LOVE IT please please extend it!

Nice chill track man your vocals are good on it :)

Excellent!
I loved the introduction with that voice, the sound quality, and how relaxing the composition is overall. You create a beautiful, peaceful atmosphere.
Great job!
Juan Carlos

Absolute banger! Great work.

i can see why you like the beat so much and perfect title for track - the vocal is just enough to carry the music in to the chill zone - a feeling of freedom and contentment runs through this

B.O.M.! Synths are stellar. The beat is flame. Light and airy with a rocking lows! Nice!

Hello Bonezonmarz, I thoroughly enjoyed this track.....its well done, I agree with AB.....music is first about what moves you and then you put it out there and let folk have a listen....but do music your way...to give up on it isn't an option if you truly love it.

BOTHER ! dont do it for others , do it always for you because at the end of the day you is al you got an will always understand what you like, everybody else is just another point of view. AMAZING WORK , I love it, have a great week.

I agree with everything that's been said before. I can't give you my opinion on mixing or mastering, because I don't even know how to do it for my own tracks, haha. But what I do know is that what I hear sounds good; it sounds clear, crisp, and has a well-defined rhythm. I think it's a very good foundation for creating a great track, as others have mentioned, adding lyrics that draw the listener into the story you tell. I think you're doing a good job.

Great track but you need some voices into it!!!
Master is a tad bit much on my own, but who knows???
Congrats of course!
Fistbump,
Danke

I do like your work. As has already been mentioned, this track is very good from a technical pov. Everything is there: perfect mastering, good beat and melodic variety that go along exceptionally well with fine vocals. The song still bears potential for improvement in terms of variation concerning the latter because in my opinion it is a bit repetitive in the end. Nevertheless, great job. Keep it up!

A truly beautiful track - vocals, beat everything - we know what you mean, it is a slow process sometimes finding the right audience - keep going ;)

This track is beautiful with excellent sound but it needs those lyrics and the vocalist's part to really shine. I think that the songs that draw the attention of the audience are the one's complete. Nowadays it is more than easy to present "full scale" songs, they are created within some minutes and they are great music we have to admit. People all they want is to listen to good music, they don't care if it is AI or not. So, the process is a bit uneven for those trying all alone to produce music to get listened. Since you are not a professional musician, or a professional composer (I just suppose though) what is of care is the joy of making it. I do understand, recognition carries the will to continue and the feeling of real sharing. I think you are doing well though, and your music is well recognized by this community. Keep up the good work.
Best wishes, Anthony

Oops, I completely missed that one. I was really interested to see how you're handling the disco genre... which is quite rare for you. And it's great! You could definitely add your vocals. A really nice, catchy track.