Wow! Now this is a real treat alright, superb! You definitely captured the Daft Punk/French House sound and vibe, this is excellent. It flows dreamy and all of the song elements play quite well together. It's got great balance, which is crucial that can make/break a track. From what I hear, I didn't pick up on any issues/problems and leave it as is! @Danke2026's suggested some female voice, I think that could be a nice to try sometime. Again, this is such a fire track, the execution was perfect, and don't change a thing!
As Ive been saying alot lately, Im pretty new to anything Jazz, and I hated the saxophone for a looooong time. It seems age and wisdom brings enlightenment, as Ive heard some pieces here in the community lately that have changed my mind completely, esp with the saxophone. I gotta agree with Danke on this one, the sax stands out and is really enjoyable. Nice work.
Bro! This is outstanding!!!
My favourite instrument is sax and it's rally steals the show!
Absolute fan of your musics and hope you're gonna make some money from it. :-)
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Danke
This is good. Make no mistake, you are an original. Solid production and those melodies paired with your vocals nicely. Great job BOM! Keep making great music!
Great sound sir. Everything about the song is enjoyable. That piano and classic drum pattern deserve some bells. Your unique voice completes the song as well. I agree with the others....you're git an original sound
Lovely tune. Rap takes precision and practice to be in the beat. You will get there, it takes patience. I love your singing voice but it is always good to stretch ourselves a little. Just a thought - maybe one of Pnnywze's Monzder Squadds ace rappers could have a go and then you could redo your version - you have a lovely voice and I'm sure you will get there. Keep going.
hey kay thank you for your feedback. i decided i didnt like the rap so decided to go in a differet direction and sang new lyrics. i enjoy coming up with melodies more anyway. let me kno what you think
Are these your own vocals? If so, you should definitely do more songs like this, you really shine on this one. You must've fixed the vocal mixing, because it sounds good to me. Well done!
hi man, yes they are my vocals, thank you. i plan on making more like this as im deciding to do what i like, amd thats beats inspired by clams casino amongst others. thank for commenting
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My favourite instrument is sax and it's rally steals the show!
Absolute fan of your musics and hope you're gonna make some money from it. :-)
Fistbump,
Danke
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I like it!
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Mark
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Danke
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great track really ...
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Danke
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Keep it up bro!!
Legendary!
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