BONEZONMARZ

Nice tunes Bonez! Chill, pretty minimal, does all it needs to. I like. Well done.

Of everything I've heard from you, this is probably my favorite song. The rhythm makes you want to dance from the very beginning, and your performance is perfect throughout. I think you've done a fantastic job. Congratulations!

Unusual sounds offset by your velvet melodic vocal - really nice work

Hello Bonezonmarz, pretty cool track bro with a real slick beat.....like your vocals as well.

Definitely a banger. That bass is really cool.
I like it! Cheers!

This is a beautifully crafted song. Love the instrumentation and the cadence of your vocals. Can't wait to hear more.

This would go hard if a DJ spun this out in a nightclub. I like the way it sounds dark and glassy really hits that old school beat em up story mode soundtrack well

Hello Bonezonmarz, I thoroughly enjoyed this track.....its well done, I agree with AB.....music is first about what moves you and then you put it out there and let folk have a listen....but do music your way...to give up on it isn't an option if you truly love it.

BOTHER ! dont do it for others , do it always for you because at the end of the day you is al you got an will always understand what you like, everybody else is just another point of view. AMAZING WORK , I love it, have a great week.

Hello Bonezonmarz, enjoyed this electronic trip, quite lively with the synths sounds and beats......nice work.

Cool song bro. Lovely melodic lines and bass.
I like it! Cheers!

Love this - really uplifting and great to chill out to - v pleasant sound patterns

Ah, herelisten to that 90s sound. Really nice synths, beautiful pulses, old game pad and a danceable melody. You rarely hear music like this nowadays. Its a great track with excellent productionwell done.

I agree with everything that's been said before. I can't give you my opinion on mixing or mastering, because I don't even know how to do it for my own tracks, haha. But what I do know is that what I hear sounds good; it sounds clear, crisp, and has a well-defined rhythm. I think it's a very good foundation for creating a great track, as others have mentioned, adding lyrics that draw the listener into the story you tell. I think you're doing a good job.

Great track but you need some voices into it!!!
Master is a tad bit much on my own, but who knows???
Congrats of course!
Fistbump,
Danke

Hi,

I don't think your friends are just being nice. Musically, technically, and structurally, your track is good.
Butand I think this is what Gizmo meant tooit's just a framework. A foundation. A solid and promising one.
To turn this foundation into a house, you need a few more floors.
This includes a singer who rises above the static base and adds a flexible, vibrant layersomeone who tells a story, an interesting and captivating story worth hearing.
And every house needs people to bring it to life: catchy melodies, ad-libs, backing vocalselements that support the singer at crucial moments.
A bridge would also be important, a passage that leads us from the basic structure to a climax, a kind of finale.

So keep building your house. It's worth it.

Best regards,
Manuela

I do like your work. As has already been mentioned, this track is very good from a technical pov. Everything is there: perfect mastering, good beat and melodic variety that go along exceptionally well with fine vocals. The song still bears potential for improvement in terms of variation concerning the latter because in my opinion it is a bit repetitive in the end. Nevertheless, great job. Keep it up!

A truly beautiful track - vocals, beat everything - we know what you mean, it is a slow process sometimes finding the right audience - keep going ;)

This track is beautiful with excellent sound but it needs those lyrics and the vocalist's part to really shine. I think that the songs that draw the attention of the audience are the one's complete. Nowadays it is more than easy to present "full scale" songs, they are created within some minutes and they are great music we have to admit. People all they want is to listen to good music, they don't care if it is AI or not. So, the process is a bit uneven for those trying all alone to produce music to get listened. Since you are not a professional musician, or a professional composer (I just suppose though) what is of care is the joy of making it. I do understand, recognition carries the will to continue and the feeling of real sharing. I think you are doing well though, and your music is well recognized by this community. Keep up the good work.
Best wishes, Anthony

Oops, I completely missed that one. I was really interested to see how you're handling the disco genre... which is quite rare for you. And it's great! You could definitely add your vocals. A really nice, catchy track.

Absolutely - slick, smooth and whimsical

Pro banger. Like all your stuff.
I "feel" (like I have a clue) like you might want to sing this like one full step up? I am saying that as a full fledged non singer though haha.

Yeah, it sounds like a work of professional.
Good job! I like it!

It sounds pro.

It does sound quite good. I like the opening piano.