Flawlessleon

you surprised me with this beat, It sounds good but I think you should add a bit more base to it and possibly add another instrument to the verse, its up to you

Nice track but definetely not dnb. Its more of a hiphop or dubstep beat.

Very creative song! Nice sounding bass! Good drums too! I agree with Bobbybooth that it might be a good idea to drop out the vocals for a few bars, it would give the listener a little break. Overall a very cool track though!

wouldnt have classed it as dnb necessarily. More hip hop. But nice sample and a cool beat.

on second thoughts, i like the kick after all. maybe just beef it up with another kick...Peace!

Nice work man! The tone you have on that sub is spot on, and it has just the right amount of variety on the wobble to keep it flowing and grooving without becoming repetitive. Excellent use of the vocal - super fresh. My only comment would be that that i usually prefer kicks to be less techno-y in dubstep. In the intro it sounds a bit like a techno/hardhouse build up. Could sound a bit better with another type of kick or another kick just giving it that bit more depth. Also i was thinking you could add more of a dynamic to it by mixing up the sounds - maybe take the vocal out for a few bars, mess with the bass , and get a build up going before you drop back in with the vocal and all. I think that could help make this tune even better. Its a gem.