Not sure about the dubstep bit , but your choice of sample is great love the piano and violin but they probably wants to be s'thing esle, unless you do a clean break in the middle a la shrielex , cant see the dubstep bit working ...
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If this was your first official track you could at least make it last a bit longer than that. That was just a loop LOL. But from what I hear the piano is solid. I,.....I mean "WE" just want to hear more of what you can do. So until next time "Keep'em comin & Keep'em movin".
The piano sample is sweet, and the violin is smooth.i think you need a soft bass synth line or acoustic bass (midi)to complement the piano,and cut the bass about 3-4db at60Hz.good tune with the right mix.PEACE.THE MACK MAN OUT.
I think you should take away the wobbles. They dont really make this track a dubstep track and without them, I think this tune would make a beautiful lounge track. Very impressive (minus the wobbles)
ps. I think you should finish the track too. It has a catchy tune that I can chill to.
Yeah something different, I like your poetry, and recently listened to some of your pellas, hopefully i can use them one day, cool vibes you give off. nice.
wow i really like the uniqueness about you girl. You r so very creative , and u have lots of talent. :) I dont think I could do spoken word if i tried, well it wouldnt be good, put it that way
wow this was so creative E. Really that was like a educational song lol, great stuff, next should be about psychology of a man. ;)
Very cool track Girl.
Ok I have listened to a few of your pieces now and I must give you props girl you are amazing. Like I just have to close my eyes and vibe to your poetry. I can't help but ask you to please check out my work. I only have one track up now but I am going to try to put more poems up here. You are definitely an inspiration "Never answered my phone, I was having an affair with my pain" sick
Oh man, this is truly beautiful. I am a spoken word artist myself, and it has been a while since I've head something this laid back and powerful at the same time. I feel like down south we lost the classic feel to poetry and I am definitely loving this track
I LOVE the piano. LOVE it. Right up my alley! Hey, now I recognize the sample...umm....don't tell me....Stevie Wonder?? Grrrrr. I'll figure it out. But now it's gonna bug me all day lolol. Your voice is so very cool, and I love the lyrics. Gonna see if I can download ;) Great work!
Well hello fellow Canadian. I'm formally from Cape Breton and now a resident of Vancouver Island. Where about are you from? As per the track, very interesting and very novel. A fine piece of modern poetry put to music.
After listening to your last piece I wanted to hear more, despite the fact that I should go to bed lol). I'm liking what you're doing here, speech then actual singing, back to speech. It fits so well. Genius.
This is an incredible piece, very professional. I love everything about it except for the fact that I didn't do it :-)
Seriously, great piece of music.
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ps. I think you should finish the track too. It has a catchy tune that I can chill to.
Nick
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Very cool track Girl.
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Seriously, great piece of music.
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