Play 2 now...
I'll admit that this is a pretty cool groove, but it also sounds like ya needta work on adjusting the volume levels just a tad, because the bass-like synth seems to overpower the drums a little. And the vox sound like they could use a bit of tweeking too (though I like 'em for the most part). Like at first they sound drowned out by the bass-like synth and then as the song progresses they sound too pronounced. I'm thinkin that beyond leveling 'em out ya might wanna consider thowing an effect or 2 on 'em too (like light distortion with flanger or somethin). Which is one thing Garageband is great for. Anyways, this sounds like a very decent beginning to a bangin song worthy of being compared to some other artists like Primal Scream, NIN, and similar (with a slight twist of Tricky's off-the-wall style). Later on!
Starts out pure Electro and then morphs into Rock and then back into Electro Rock. I like the wicked beats from the Electro part.
It seems like there are 3 tunes (at least) in here. I'm not much into the singing part since it sounds more like Rock to me. I'd take the thing apart and develop the themes separately. It sounds like you might even have thought the same since you stop and start what seems like different tunes at various times. Not a bad effort though. I'd personally stick with the Electro since that's my taste.
on Only In Your Dreams by jgmuzic
I'll admit that this is a pretty cool groove, but it also sounds like ya needta work on adjusting the volume levels just a tad, because the bass-like synth seems to overpower the drums a little. And the vox sound like they could use a bit of tweeking too (though I like 'em for the most part). Like at first they sound drowned out by the bass-like synth and then as the song progresses they sound too pronounced. I'm thinkin that beyond leveling 'em out ya might wanna consider thowing an effect or 2 on 'em too (like light distortion with flanger or somethin). Which is one thing Garageband is great for. Anyways, this sounds like a very decent beginning to a bangin song worthy of being compared to some other artists like Primal Scream, NIN, and similar (with a slight twist of Tricky's off-the-wall style). Later on!
on Only In Your Dreams by jgmuzic
It seems like there are 3 tunes (at least) in here. I'm not much into the singing part since it sounds more like Rock to me. I'd take the thing apart and develop the themes separately. It sounds like you might even have thought the same since you stop and start what seems like different tunes at various times. Not a bad effort though. I'd personally stick with the Electro since that's my taste.
on Only In Your Dreams by jgmuzic