Crucethus was right. This is some top notch Doom RnB, and others were right who said that the song needs a break. I think a pad or a distorted guitar would sound pretty slick to build on top of that piano. Everybody is an expert though. Keep doing what you do bro.
Dude that kicks ass! you should email me so we can do a rock song! Joshbaucum@gmail.com I can make vocals on some guitar u put on my beat. Also can you put some guitars on no more sorrow people would love that
Reminds me of Evanescence, Linkin Park, Twista (the rapper)I think? and YoYo from way,way,way back. Nice thoughts and lyrics about overcoming adversity. Keep the Faith! :)
Love the piano in this, sounds very emotional. Nice lyrics and voice, but maybe end the song with a chord that echoes so it doesn't end like it was cut off ;d just saying
appology for this second comment .
buT may I ask U what do U want from collaborator abouT this ?
not for collab , because perception behind and sensible sensation in your track , U can count on me if U may think I can do anything .
that piano is such impressive which hypnotise me...
U sing by your hearT ...I'm not if there's soul in our existance or noT ..buT U're singng by your sprit...
and this make this package perfecT ..
just as a suggestion , I think , that beautifull pianO desreves to be heard alone and withouT vocal for a while...
accompaniment of that pianO with a Cello in the middle of this track only for 10 seconds ( for example ) can express depth of this beautifull lyriX too more ..
althoughT , this track is verywelldone rightnow too.
althought I'm no expert in no genre and speciallY RnB..buT my fav mark is waving his hand to describe U instead of me , this was one of the ever best RnB traX which I heared now..
best wishes.___Behnam
Yes we just released an album. Just looking for a good place to sale it on and all. Moving to the city of Houston Texas next month to try an get some help from a label
Man dude killer track you made, I enjoyed everything about it. Great vocals and very well put together. LOL to StaticNomad, I remember Snow probably tons of people have never heard of the guy. Anyway thanks for sharing pretty good stuff.
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What a song you have in your pocket...:-) and I nearly miss it...great one, awesome one, yeah... :-)
Best, Danke
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Good vocals from all of you!
The next thing is to make a girlpower song with you on your knees and your gf in charge! How about that? =D
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Amazing track!
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agree to comment by decibel.
track needs a break .
you sing good .
subject is interesting.
i liked.
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buT may I ask U what do U want from collaborator abouT this ?
not for collab , because perception behind and sensible sensation in your track , U can count on me if U may think I can do anything .
on Sik Style - No More Sorrow by SikStyle1
U sing by your hearT ...I'm not if there's soul in our existance or noT ..buT U're singng by your sprit...
and this make this package perfecT ..
just as a suggestion , I think , that beautifull pianO desreves to be heard alone and withouT vocal for a while...
accompaniment of that pianO with a Cello in the middle of this track only for 10 seconds ( for example ) can express depth of this beautifull lyriX too more ..
althoughT , this track is verywelldone rightnow too.
althought I'm no expert in no genre and speciallY RnB..buT my fav mark is waving his hand to describe U instead of me , this was one of the ever best RnB traX which I heared now..
best wishes.___Behnam
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Very goos job IMHO .
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Kyle
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Good vocals. Reminds me a little bit in places (when you sing rapidly) of Snow, he of 'Informer' fame though that's definitely a compliment.
This is actually pretty deep stuff.
Music sits nicely and I like the chord progression. It's honestly much better than I thought it would be.
Nice string break on 2:07 but there's then the repeat of that very abrupt cutoff. That can be improved.
I think a lot of people are going to enjoy this and it definitely has commercial potential (I don't care about that but you might).
I like the very last note of the song too.
Excellent work!
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