Karnivll

Nice groove but I think it needs a little bit more finishing.

It seemed to me to, un part, be a stream of consciousness piece. Like what you did with this.

Kepp them coming

John

dude, this song's gotta win coolest title of year hands down! i like how you've got that slicky bass line over the rolling drums, very cool. very cool programming. i can definitely hear the puppy and ministry influences, but not in a bad way, if you follow.

hey, man, i ran across your page looking for other rivetheads so i thought i'd check out some of your tunes. this song freakin jams! the pads remind of 'mind the perpetual..'. slamming drums, pumping synth line, this track rocks. i like the glitch elements sliced in there, nice change of pace.

I thought it was alright for your first attempt. listen to losts of d.s., that will inspire you.

B

great track... i def would like to u see u play wit the rate.. really was expecting that wobble to get moving later on... and possibly bring up the drums a bit..

great job tho..

Not bad for a first try. Definately got the bass right. I would have to agree with ET on the compression and EQ, Try adding a M-Class EQ to the hardware device on your digital rack. Turn on param 2 adjust the frequency to around 3 kHz(or play with until preferred sound is achieved), and turn the parametric nob all the way down, then play with gain until you get a crisper sound without clipping. (note: you can do this on individual tracks, too. such as the drum track and the bass to make the single track a little crisper. Try slappin an m-class compressor on the drums and tweakin' around with the nobs to get the snare attack on par with the kick (go for a low threshold, no soft clip, and play with the ratio, attack and release.) Also, if you leave the reason mix low when you export, it makes a lot more room for master compression and EQ). I usually also right click on the hardware device, select "create effect", then select 8-band parallel compression. This should really thicken up your sound, too.

The song is great! its got nice wobble and pitch work, I would like to hear you play with the rate a little more on the oscillator, but this is just preferrence. All in all this is an awesome first attempt. If you get the Muff out it will surely rock!

keep em comin!

~Cheers!~

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Terrible? I never said anything of the sort! This song is very very good composition, It's just the engineering side that needs some work.

Naughty. Cool track man, need to work on the EQ and compression etc a little, all the elements are a little flat right now. Need to bring the drums out a little, crisp and beef them up a bit with some EQ. Maybe whack a big distortion on the bass too, just something to make it stand out. Got some good elements in there man, keep them coming.

Like it, it's definitly weird, really weird, but it made me smile, and that's pretty insane :P

Michael

i see this...

i daydream some really odd things..

"people that dream by day,are cognizant of many more things then people that only dream at night"-edgar allen poe-

your a grimy ass man......i love the 16 bit stuff too

so keep up the glitch hell

I keep listening to this,really good and the bong sample is smokin'(yes,pun intended)great drums, hit it hard!(yes again)

Allen

Nice synth and hard driving beat...has a mezmerizing pulse to it.Now if you'll excuse me,I need to take the Browns to the SuperBowl...

RawHead }:)-

Really cool,I like the beat,smacks you in the face.Makes me want to add some angry guitar.

AllenV

damn i just shat.

Solid Glitch Track!!! I enjoyed the Progressive tempo changes. I was boogying right along with that bot!

Keep it up, your stuff is RAD!!

Not bad for bowel movements I guess you like skinny puppy.
I have a new Industrial track please and review https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/68265

just stopping by how are things hope u make more music soon peace

man i thought i was whacky with the titles i like the idea but i dont like the fact that u didnt get any sleep,THAT'S VERY IMPORTANT! for our music minds LOL the sounds in here are like glitch and sex there both great things to do(drum sound effect)
anyway great track man loving ur style.

hmm dark...nice. Got my attention..i'm jammin with this one!

yeah im into this dark n industrial

mad track mate great work like some old computer game gone crazy.

re jump-cutting - a lot like what yr already doing at around 2.23 where the tempo has an instant shift rather than bein dialed up or down - but using a nano-second of black or white or pink space to heighten the dislocation - startle the temporal lobe - a synaptic discontinuity in the sheets of sound. goddam i sound like i need more coffee or something, maybe librium. peace K.

man you know how to end a track - that little click blew a fuse. i'm digging the twists and tweaking on this - y'know what might be fun on those tempo changes is jump-cutting to diminish the knob-twisting aspect as well as more subtraction/addition of the sound materials, not exactly dub-wise but weird the way you are - stay that way!!

this is sick, love IT!! happy 4-20 !!!

high times with this one, real hard hitting drums man love the awesome sounds.

Peace love and technoforever