FruitlessRecords

The brake at 1.03 kinda removes the flow of the track but i couldnt whip any thing like this atm so well done nice track :)

im liking what you've done so far m8, hopefully you will finish it so we can all have a listen in full.

Nice bass, putting in ur note in triplets really gives it that electro groove.

love that bassy kick you use....great work man!!!! Nice synth choice too..

I really like this!Has a feel good vibe to it.And the vocals were very good,I was sorry that it ended abruptly.

not a bad tune mate but your melodies are to high in the tune and your drums are low im more drawn to your melodie when i feel i should be dwran to the whole tune if you get what i mean plus maybe you should put more bass and different melodies in there also because the track is basicly the same from beggining to end you need a bit more variation in the track arrangment mate but respcet for trying yeah check back on you soon ok

The melody and the electro bass line are near perfect. It might be a taste, but overall i like it already. Hope to hear some nice string pads or something. Keep at it!

Also real great, you got skillzzz, but you should make it longer, yeah yeah yeah

Good but short, i like your synths you got in here!

If ya don't know genre it electro or electronic most of the time fits with your track.

At 0:15 in your track there starts this leading-loop, you can use this to be alone, you know everything else stops (slowly or at once, not important just use some crashes and stuff) and you just let that loop loopin' alone a few secs and then you build up your track again with the beat and stuff, it always is cool because you can hear some loops alone and see how great they are and whats also cool is that you can expand your track with another 15-30 seconds, you can also put another loop in and let it slowly build up with the beat, so many possibilities.
Hope i could help you and also hoping that my english isn't that bad.

greetings from mister fujisam

Some techno elements shown of there.....
Nice rising-modd track.....perfect for dancing & stuff...

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Cheers...

I like the feel of this track, sounds like you are bouncing back from the HD loss... Doesn't it suck relying on technology?

All the makings of a hot time on the dance floor. As Spivkurl suggested, it could use a bigger build - maybe pads, but maybe something a little unexpected...?

hey sorry but this does not sound like deep house to me . kick is far to bassy and the percussion is too simple. however i like your bassline, try and build your track around this by adding a lead , melodies and more percussion .

fook yeah! I like the bass line on this track! Very nice choice of synths too. I like the hard edge you've put on this cool house track. Sounds like it could use some big sweeping pads or something like that, it might allow you to build the progression even further. Nice work!

This is the only trance track in your track list and sounds ok too, it needs little work to sharp it up, but it's already good.
Nice sequence to start up, progressive acid-like..., maybe a punchy bassdrum will do the magic ;)
It's short but powerful...

Cheers

I actually like the drums n bass. The synth/piano intro is nice, but switch it up throughout the track - gets a little repetitious.

This track would mesh nicely with female trio vocals. Even just a few "ooh's" and "ahh's". Great track over too soon.

Aw dude, just as I was getting into the groove it ended. Sweet, sensual beat. Fill this puppy out.

the intro just drew me in but i think the drums n bass could have been better..it sort of took away dat r&b feel..just my opinion but solid track cuz..keep doin wat u do.