djredrum187

Man what is that in the background. A song playing backwards. Whatever it is it's tight. Nice work.

damn. all i have to say is that every time the melody starts over i get chills. its been a while since i heard some thing like this. ill shit. thats about as dungeon as it gets. destruction. audio obliteration. keep it up.
dopro

Ha ha,...dope track a little repetative but dope anyway. Had mr freestyling to this one. Had to fav it.

hot man keepup it soundin real good maybe reduce th volume ai bit besides that pretty much all sayd get sum hot vocalz on that one ^^ keepup ait cheerz dusty

Aside from a bit too much volume, especially on the distorted bass, this is a wicked track. First you say? Wow... can't wait to see more posted!
As you get used to the software you'll learn more about levels and develop an ear for volume levels. Awesome stuff man.

Lisa

Nice one bruh, watch the fuzzyness of your bass tho , it could kill a good track IMO.

nice the guitar sounds cool with the beat. but i would work on mixing / mastering. try turning everything down quite a bit to fix what to me sounds like a bit of clipping in the low mid frequency range. maybe pan the hat, and that synth-ish piano sound. and throw a limiter on the master channel to bring everything back up again. also its a bit repetitive, i'd spend some time working on fills and drops. other than that really great for your first beat man. keep it up.