mariano3233

Hello,

This track has massive potential, the only thing I'd add to what the others are saying is that you will want to tune the drums to the key of the music. I'm not familiar with Logic Pro, but here's a tutorial link that may help:

https://support.apple.com/kb/PH13223?locale=en_US

I wish you all the best.

I think you have a lot of potential, and your friend too. You have been putting out really creative stuff. keep it coming!!!

Thanks for leaving your comment. For not being a rapper, you get down! I like what I hear on this track. I'm going to see what else you've been doing in the lab!

I liked the vocal also. I didn't hear anything wrong with the track at all, just that it is too short.

I like the job on vocals, a bit less the acoustic. Here is my suggestion: keep the drum part and try to dress the song using some guitars, you can create kinda counTRap!!!

Sounds good. I notice it does say dirty mix. It's dirty for sure. Clean it up, i'm interested in hearing a mixed and mastered version. I hear potential. keep grinding.

Wow mate,
This track is brilliant your voice sounds great on it.
Well done
Jamid

i really dig this ..if u want i can mix it for u coalitionthelabel (at) gmail.com
send the beat and the acapella

i think it could be much more fast than this
find your style and rap with pure feelings

regards nayab

Sippin on some $hit, you can see um lit....Lol dig it! keep grinding fam. I like your authentic sound on this.

This is actually dope for just messing around!! Keep up the work

This track is fire and I love your flow! I know everyone else has suggested vocal processing, but, get Xfer OTT. Its a free multiband dynamics tool, and you can make even trash vocals good with it, so I bet if you play with it, you'll get damn amazing results! (if you dont already use OTT that is). That's really my only feedback for vocal processing as others have said what I would have already said.

Ah shit your right, I think i meant Yung Gravy

This is pretty good, you got the same flow as Ugly God

I'd say try to learn about vocal processing, even just the basics, because the song will sound way better if the vocals have a little reverb, etc.

Tight werk! I can hear a nice laid back hook on it. I don't consider myself a rapper, but I do consider myself a lyrically inclined individual, let know the direction you going with the trax as far as concept and I would be willing to take a swing at doing a hook.

I Like it, but you should have doubled your voice track and put more gain
Good Job Though!!

you should try put another track with your voice on top on what you have now so you have two of the same sound on top of eachother if it to high you should cut bass or mid or even both so you only have low right now it hard to hear what you are saying because the music is to high volume but it sound good so far.

Ayyy this dope!

effectively, this sound is allowed listen with pleasure, highly-rated repetitive finally is not annoying, I was afraid that it creates a certain dullness but it's not the case! Really dig the deep atmosphere in this one! nice job for a first track!

Bleep

I like it a lot ......great sound

This deserves more attention
Good Work!!

Not bad for your first track. Nice chords. Keep it up!

I feel you. Don't do it because I suggested it, keep it like it is if thats what you were going for.

It just feels like there's a mid/low range thats missing which the sub should be occupying so its a little weird to me, but do you brotha.

Dope beat, definitely dig it.

a couple pieces of feedback:

I'm not sure if this is the word i'm looking for but the drums seem overcompressed as hell. Either that or it sounds like the frequency of the bass is interfering with itself. This is hard to explain so see this link if you don't know what i'm talking about and are interested: https://courses.lumenlearning.com/boundless-physics/chapter/interactions-with-sound-waves/

The melody sounds good but does seem to get a little repetitive so maybe add some variation throughout in different ways