yo can i get this beat to rap on? looperman exclusive no royalties or anything
lemme know! fire beat
as far as delivery and vocals you need more volume and motivation rappin on it
lemme know what u think
if u wanna email we can work maybe on a original some shit
my email on my picture if you click it
This Almost feels like a sound that existed during the summer of love in the U.K. at a rave in 1988, but with a cleaner modern production. Interesting song. I like it! Tres Minimal.
Cru
Love the percs, the 808, i feel, needs to be layered with a kick. It would make the track bouncier. The hihat pattern is a bit dull. It would benefit with a few faster rolls to give it a trappy vibe. The track gets a bit repetitive, a problem i am still struggling with myself. Overall, its a great track. Just a few personal prefrences. Keep it up!!
I actually did put a kick behind the bass prob just needs to be louder. Normally I put a 3rd progression in the track but I honestly got lazy lol just wanted a quick tune. I deff agree I struggle with putting “enough” hi hats into a track from time to time. Thanks for your feedback will deff work on it!
-mari*
Needs work. I'd say just in your vocal delivery and it would help it tremendously, seems a little flat. Also taking in consideration with the style of beat that your flow was purposely that way but still not a bad track. I enjoyed the beat the lyrics and flow was mediocre. Keep going.
Yeah I don’t rap lmao but I was just playin around you know you know. Thank you for your comment on the beat tho that’s my lil baby it’s nice to hear some appreciation.
Ps I named a caterpillar Fibonacci when I was in 4th grade. So that’s dope.
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very boppy
-CAP
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Well done.
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lemme know! fire beat
as far as delivery and vocals you need more volume and motivation rappin on it
lemme know what u think
if u wanna email we can work maybe on a original some shit
my email on my picture if you click it
much love
-CAP
on New Beat I Made Would Love Feedback by mariano3233
great work
-CAP
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Cru
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PB
-mari*
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The track is baggin
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Ps I named a caterpillar Fibonacci when I was in 4th grade. So that’s dope.
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