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Breaks are nice idea. The gunes are after 1:30 disturbing me. Did you think about a vocal? But overall nice track.

I dunno, feels like there's too much going on in the beat, or some of the instruments don't match up. I don't think it will be an easy beat to rap on.

off tha chain the bass is awsome in here and the hook is killa homie keep up the good work God Bless

yo fam can i use this.........4real man ill put a hook on this sum lines of fire

sweets, this shit is nice dog.
i like that little space drop in the begining, lovely.
its wierd, but the wierdness adds to its freshness. lmao
whatever i meant by that..lol

keep it up.

firstly, i love the brakes, i mean the pauses. me, i like it when the suspence is on. the violin sounds familier, not sure when. and u did it well with the guns.
overrall good.

Yo good job on the chops in this one!!!! I read on one of your other tracks you dont use many samples cauz you dont know you... You see how you broke apart all those lil sections of the piano loop in this, thats all sampling is, find an old beat, or whatev, chop it up real small, and make new song that sound diff!!! Get interesting when you chop up 2 songs and make one beat with the samples, tho cant be difficult at time, just gotta work at it, run different fx on the chops, whatev!!! Just Do You Tho!!!

Keep it Up Homie!!!!!

SpitShine

Niiice Beaaaat my man, oooooowiiiiiiieee!!!! hells yes just killed an illie free over this beat!!! way to go bro, sick is!!! Should enter the next hip hop beatmakers comp in the competitions forum!!

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SpitShine

You could spit somethin good over this, its a nice start

I LIKE THE WAY YOU MIX YOUR TRAX IT'S OFF THE HOOK

im actually liking tha track....like u said its diff, thats wat i like, sumtn diff still wit tha same kinda feel for various artists to grasp
keep em comn homie

diggin the switch upz and tempo here dog killed it perfect for fast rapping and quick switch upz my kind of shit all day great job

Not bad... gotta sorta spit fast to this joint... i would suggest changing the clap to something else... IS this using fruityloops drum hits? If so find some different ones... Other than that i like the pattern u did with it... keep on man!

nice 1 bob...keep on wat u doin

good integration of the gun sound this one soundz good

soundz tight jim jonez style bangin beat

Like the laid back feel in this track, the shotgun sound effect is cool but it's a little overused, maybe only bring it in every other bar rather than every bar.
Good work,
Helix