Im quite highly critical on here so i hope you dont take offence, there is non intended, but here is a quick review:
Good track overall, and nice atmosphere, I think the general structure could do with some work, for instance, not having the vocals overlap the bass, (have the bassline do its 2 bars or so then, stop everything and say 'at war' or 'at war, with germany' whatever sounds best.)
The high hats and the toms work very well. I think the snare you've used sounds far to much like a high hat, i'd find another one if were you. The Bass drum isnt very audiable, try EQ'ing it a bit or using a compressor, or erm, ooh i forget what it is on fruity, SoundGoodizer i think works well to englarge sounds somewhat.
The Actuall bassline you've used (im sure its Albino, isit? :P) Is nice, but the LFO sync is abit all over the place, just needs a bit more thought as to how it goes. Dont be afraid to repeat yourself a bit with this, once you find a good pattern use that, then maybe modify it a bit 5 bars or so down the line.
Dont worry about being critical mate, I'm actually quite flattered that you'd spend that long scruitinizing one of my tracks, thanks (Y).
At the second drop I had the vocals overlap the bass overlap the bass on purpose so to not have it sound exactly the same as the first drop.
Listening to it now I get what you mean about the hi-hats and snare. And teh kick probably doesn't sound that prominent becase there's only 2 every 8 bars, I was thinking about changing that earlier today, but I wasnt too sure about it, I'll try it with some more and compressing it.
Yeah, how did you know it was Albino? Aha! I was going for a crazy LFO kinda feel, with it being kinda laid back, and then having a wild bass, I try toning it down and seeing what it sounds like.
Like it & can easily imagine myself (maybe a few years ago) going nuts on the dance floor to it. The Sparta samples are really cool. If I had one criticism it would be that the lead was a little too busy for my taste. However who says I'm right it just taste at the end of the day. Beats are ace though - good work:)
Cheers. I only made it in like an hour. I'm gnna make the snare stand out a bit more and make the bass louder after the drop and make the lead quiter and variate it a bit.
its good, did you layer the snare drums like he said? preferably put a clap, static and snare all in one should make it stand out a bit more. nice bass sound though.
There's a clap, a burst of static and one snare in there, yeh I might try 2 in there. I made the bass in 2 seconds with Albino I think :) Cheers for the comments ;)
Keeping it up i see buddy good.
il be back from kent tmra. so il gee yah a bell.
next weekend i think we shud have a day in on Fl and thaaa. will be a laughh.
on I'm Sick of Wobbles by EnkiDubstep
on Beat 'n' Bass by EnkiDubstep
on "This Country is at War with Germany." v2 by EnkiDubstep
i love the sounds you used.
on "This Country is at War with Germany." v2 by EnkiDubstep
im liking your electronic aspect of dubstep.
keep it up..
chek out my new Bump music, ill put up more next week
on "This Country is at War with Germany." by EnkiDubstep
on "This Country is at War with Germany." by EnkiDubstep
Good track overall, and nice atmosphere, I think the general structure could do with some work, for instance, not having the vocals overlap the bass, (have the bassline do its 2 bars or so then, stop everything and say 'at war' or 'at war, with germany' whatever sounds best.)
The high hats and the toms work very well. I think the snare you've used sounds far to much like a high hat, i'd find another one if were you. The Bass drum isnt very audiable, try EQ'ing it a bit or using a compressor, or erm, ooh i forget what it is on fruity, SoundGoodizer i think works well to englarge sounds somewhat.
The Actuall bassline you've used (im sure its Albino, isit? :P) Is nice, but the LFO sync is abit all over the place, just needs a bit more thought as to how it goes. Dont be afraid to repeat yourself a bit with this, once you find a good pattern use that, then maybe modify it a bit 5 bars or so down the line.
But well done, its sounding quite professional :P
At the second drop I had the vocals overlap the bass overlap the bass on purpose so to not have it sound exactly the same as the first drop.
Listening to it now I get what you mean about the hi-hats and snare. And teh kick probably doesn't sound that prominent becase there's only 2 every 8 bars, I was thinking about changing that earlier today, but I wasnt too sure about it, I'll try it with some more and compressing it.
Yeah, how did you know it was Albino? Aha! I was going for a crazy LFO kinda feel, with it being kinda laid back, and then having a wild bass, I try toning it down and seeing what it sounds like.
Cheers man, greatly appreciated. (Y)
on THIS IS SPARTA! [Work in Progress] by EnkiDubstep
on THIS IS SPARTA! [Work in Progress] by EnkiDubstep
on Shuuuffle! by EnkiDubstep
on Beat 'n' Bass by EnkiDubstep
il be back from kent tmra. so il gee yah a bell.
next weekend i think we shud have a day in on Fl and thaaa. will be a laughh.
on Beat 'n' Bass by EnkiDubstep
on Beat 'n' Bass by EnkiDubstep
i need to learn how to get the dubstep bass sound...
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on Beat 'n' Bass by EnkiDubstep
on Beat 'n' Bass by EnkiDubstep
on Hawt 'n' Kold by EnkiDubstep
You should upload some more tracks on here.
Keep it up.
Helix