JJIreland
By the Grace of God
My mom, United States
Joined : 21st Nov 2016 - 9 years ago
Last Online : 26th Nov 2025 - 2 weeks ago
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on Sounds by JJIreland
on Sounds by JJIreland
on Look out Below by JJIreland
I also think that it could need a little bit of variation - Nothing special, but some more piano or guitar tunes that support the Main melody, you know?
However all in one it's still a pretty good track! Keep it up!
Thank you for the feedback. Unfortunately, this project has died like many others but if I ever revisit it I will look back to this comment for advice.
on Look out Below by JJIreland
https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/228702
on Look out Below by JJIreland
some open hats , percs would give it more rhythm and maybe another instrument to spice things up a little.
great track ,keep up the good work
I'd like to add a guitar of sorts to back the backup melody but I don't have access to anything of that nature.
The track is supposed to be basic. The vocals I haven't added are supposed to be the main melody and the focus.
on TheBlueSAMPLE by JJIreland
on TheBlueSAMPLE by JJIreland
on LMseconddraft by JJIreland
on Nice flow by JJIreland
on mledly by JJIreland
on mledly by JJIreland
on Sameold by JJIreland
on method by JJIreland
on method by JJIreland
on method by JJIreland
on method by JJIreland
fistbump, Danke
on Sameold by JJIreland
All of the levels sound good to me. Everything sits well in the mix. The only thing I would have done differently is use the Stereo Shaper on the sub, with all 4 sliders set right around 6.0 db. That would still keep it mostly centered, but spread the edges out just a little bit to fill in the space between the drums and the piano. Speaking of piano, the delay reverb and stereo effects are good. Nice and dynamic.
I know you said you plan on making some adjustments, and I don't know what they are, so I'll suggest this anyhow...
at the 1:08 mark, I would introduce some pads, or strings in the background to fill it out a little bit more. Right now, with just the drums, bass and piano, it gets repetitive. It's a strong foundation for what could be a much larger piece.
But, then again, I don't listen to hip-hop, and I don't know what you're going for, so take my opinions for what they are.
Overall, excellent work. Keep it up.
Take care.
V.
on Sameold by JJIreland
on Babils by JJIreland
on Babils by JJIreland
on Babils by JJIreland
Very cool, love it
on Babils by JJIreland
Wayne
on Babils by JJIreland
Idk whether those are bells or Rhodes but either way I like it
on Babils by JJIreland
on Babils by JJIreland