send me a copy of all finished versions ... this is perfect for my project Star Born Loverz, I'll record vocals and send back and you can tell me if you're interested in working together. I'm in a band called TRIUMPHANT look us up on FB.. it's a post roots reggae band~ but I'm trying to do this solo project and I love your stuff... let me know!
triumphantmusic801 @ gmail .com send mp3's !!! I'll get to work right away.
I can see why you made that post as this could definitely go a lot of different directions. I'd like to encourage you to finish more of your stuff even if you don't end up liking the end result as you can learn a lot by doing that. as for what to do with this one in particular, in the end its up to you but I think I'd skip out on the rap with something this chill, i generally find rap fits better with something a little more intense. if i were writing it id put in some kinda piano or synth melody and a relatively simple bassline. this seems more like a beginning and there's just so many different ways to go with this its kinda hard to make suggestions. if you want to grab some attention though id recommend a lot more variation on things in the song as you make it, or if we're just chilling out a slow progression. thats all i got right now, hope it helps
Thanks for the suggestions! I understand the rap thing but maybe it'd help if I said I was planning for it to be a deep, clean styled rap-ish type thing but still have a melody in the lines (not sure if I explained that good). This is a beginning and I have and will continue to play around with some synths, pianos, and rhodes. Thank you for your support!
Wow, you have got a really great piece of work! It's catchy and found myself humming to it the 3rd, 4th, 5th time I listened to it!! I really like this, as I am a pianist. Have been since I was 6 years old, and started composing at 12. (I'm now... lets just say over 50 now). I came to looperman because, honestly, my timing isn't the greatest. Almost atrocious if anyone were to try and put a drum loop to it. Hah, not good. My music just has a way of its own, however, I am looking for a few loops like yours of the drums. Something simple, yet, to the point to keep me on track. Thank you for posting!! Tamra
Geez. Thanks so much for this thoughtful comment! I really enjoyed reading this. If you'd like some drum loops like that of this track, I'd be more than happy to do that! These drums are super simple and great to keep time with. If you go to my profile, you'll find my direct email there. If you have any other questions or requests, feel free to send a message. I'll follow up with a direct looperman message. Take care!
Dude, Has a very nice ambient feel to it. I dig it. One little note, bring down the main volume on the intro instrument a touch as to not be soo prominante. Maybe a light compression effect on the drums? Bring out a little punch to the sound. But, sounds good. Keep it up!!
Thanks! I have since changed that, thank you! I'll investigate the drums as they're all in separate groups so I'd have to find a way to collectively provide more compression to each individual percussion equally... Convert them to an audio track and compress? Anyways. Thanks!!
Repetitive. But creative. I like it. If I were you, I would've added more to it. I don't know what, but I would added another peice. Keep it up though.
Thank you for sharing your opinion! The repetition is certainly something that exists. I try to change it up a little bit; however, it is hard to change it up without completely altering the song at the spot I want to provide a shift.
Commented on Sampletrack by JJIreland
send me a copy of all finished versions ... this is perfect for my project Star Born Loverz, I'll record vocals and send back and you can tell me if you're interested in working together. I'm in a band called TRIUMPHANT look us up on FB.. it's a post roots reggae band~ but I'm trying to do this solo project and I love your stuff... let me know!
triumphantmusic801 @ gmail .com
send mp3's !!! I'll get to work right away.
here's spotify links to my work
https://open.spotify.com/track/6kNpb4z03wJifYi4zr8ZPp-9vZfzmA
https://open.spotify.com/track/3gaQS3KRxpPC5ac8vrHoWe-IvwNSRS0yjgX7O6rRpSA
Commented on Sinker by JJIreland
The chords are very nice. The break at 0:49 sounds great. Some kind of lead at 1:43 might sound pretty cool. Great track.
Commented on Sinker by JJIreland
Melody just stucked in my head. Really good job, i've been chilled. Keep it up!
Commented on Anothersample by JJIreland
sounds really good man
Commented on Anothersample by JJIreland
another promising snippet...maybe someone will jump on it...
feetshake, Danke
Commented on Sampletrack by JJIreland
I can see why you made that post as this could definitely go a lot of different directions. I'd like to encourage you to finish more of your stuff even if you don't end up liking the end result as you can learn a lot by doing that. as for what to do with this one in particular, in the end its up to you but I think I'd skip out on the rap with something this chill, i generally find rap fits better with something a little more intense. if i were writing it id put in some kinda piano or synth melody and a relatively simple bassline. this seems more like a beginning and there's just so many different ways to go with this its kinda hard to make suggestions. if you want to grab some attention though id recommend a lot more variation on things in the song as you make it, or if we're just chilling out a slow progression. thats all i got right now, hope it helps
Commented on Sampletrack by JJIreland
It's a great start. You should work with Danke. You two would make an excellent track.
Commented on Sampletrack by JJIreland
Very cool track man!
Commented on Sampletrack by JJIreland
Send me a message on instagram @kris074_ i wanna help!
Commented on Sampletrack by JJIreland
bro it's an absolute cool snippet...til listening, I got some ideas...if you interested I'm in...get that whole song...:-)
send you my email personally...
Danke
Commented on Vannity by JJIreland
Wow, you have got a really great piece of work! It's catchy and found myself humming to it the 3rd, 4th, 5th time I listened to it!! I really like this, as I am a pianist. Have been since I was 6 years old, and started composing at 12. (I'm now... lets just say over 50 now). I came to looperman because, honestly, my timing isn't the greatest. Almost atrocious if anyone were to try and put a drum loop to it. Hah, not good. My music just has a way of its own, however, I am looking for a few loops like yours of the drums. Something simple, yet, to the point to keep me on track. Thank you for posting!! Tamra
Commented on TheoInclusionSample by JJIreland
I liked the tune, good work.
Commented on TheoInclusionSample by JJIreland
Dude, Has a very nice ambient feel to it. I dig it. One little note, bring down the main volume on the intro instrument a touch as to not be soo prominante. Maybe a light compression effect on the drums? Bring out a little punch to the sound.
But, sounds good. Keep it up!!
Commented on Sample2 by JJIreland
Love this so much. Theres a lot of emotion in this one! Beautiful!
Commented on Flexmp3 by JJIreland
I like your style!
Commented on Flexmp3 by JJIreland
very nice harmonies ! The bass is a little louder than the drums .. :-)
Commented on Flexmp3 by JJIreland
Sounds good to me, I like it bro.
Commented on Flexmp3 by JJIreland
la melodia e' molto bella, molto carino il cinguettio degli uccellini!!!!!!
Commented on Flexmp3 by JJIreland
Very nice. Very mellow. I really liked the development at 1:00.
Commented on Flexmp3 by JJIreland
Repetitive. But creative. I like it. If I were you, I would've added more to it. I don't know what, but I would added another peice. Keep it up though.
Commented on Flexmp3 by JJIreland
Very very good, maybe just a tad ripetitive, but also this way not boring!
Commented on Flexmp3 by JJIreland
Really chill track! Like the birds at the start, they give a nice vibe!
Commented on Flexmp3 by JJIreland
That's laid back. The melody is very memorable. I liked the beat.