not bad at all, i think it is very ok for a smooth flow over it. u were using the choir vocals like a sample if so, then i think u need another solid bass synth that can hold the track together when u chop up. but anyway, it still is a good track.
I liked this. The synths you use are very...pulling, almost sad and i really like it...got a great mood too. its nice bro. I think if you added a bass to this one it would really up it.
Got some real potiental
Automatically, Ima free, or listen up. See I like how you switch it up, the kit is tuff, this bytch is ruff - I rhyme so what. The music is tellin me, schoolin me, therapy, And I need, every bit. So what im a piece of shyt, I am what I eat - It all bullshyt, jus bullshyt to me. It put me in my zone, I need that there release, how dareth he, write on this board hysterically. This beat just married me, and I wont leave, but I cant be yo man cuz Im already in between. You can be my fantasy, That when Im in need. I love the way you leave, if im alive by 25 you gon be there wit me. This is jus off the top, okay how long I got? Questions I ask myself, be4 I finally drop. Is it Assassination, two assholes I done shot.
this is pretty tight maybe could use a good bass bang on it and a piano would sound sick in here witha snare god Bless keep up the good work oh and scratch that about the bass i hear it now its jus low frequency God Bless
to tell u the truth, i like what u just did with the Pad_CRTDisplay, and when u started with it, u could have kept it still in when u added the piano. this is something really new to me too, and i like it. good work.
This track is set up real nice. Just the synth roll is a little too loud like I saw others mention....when I first heard you introduce the roll, I was beggin for it to change pitches after about 4 rolls...but you left it the same. See if you like it better trying it that way.
Like the re verbs on the percuss ions The sample vocal at the beginning reminds me of Dj Shadow that's what's up bro
What do you use to say your name at the beginning lol haha
good job bro
hey man I see you are getting the sequencing down a little better
It's a good track the sythn roll loop is a little to loud the strings and the sythn roll need to be about the same volume but everything else is good
If you every want to work one somethin shoot me a holla have you check out my latest track I used one of Estae's Acapellas
Peace bro
you getting better with the sections of the song bro is the piano sample from this site? I could do some crazy stuff with that I'm gonna have to check out some them
not bad for the beginning, but put some strings in it, to live it up a lil bit. and the vocals. you could that a lil bit louder.
and it would be better if you make the beat like,
intro or direct part1 , hook(refrain), part2, maybe a bridge, hook(refrain), part3 or endsequence if you know what im talkin' about.
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Got some real potiental
Aelfo
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But the intro felt a bit dull to me, and skipable. But over all I like this track!
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Automatically, Ima free, or listen up. See I like how you switch it up, the kit is tuff, this bytch is ruff - I rhyme so what. The music is tellin me, schoolin me, therapy, And I need, every bit. So what im a piece of shyt, I am what I eat - It all bullshyt, jus bullshyt to me. It put me in my zone, I need that there release, how dareth he, write on this board hysterically. This beat just married me, and I wont leave, but I cant be yo man cuz Im already in between. You can be my fantasy, That when Im in need. I love the way you leave, if im alive by 25 you gon be there wit me. This is jus off the top, okay how long I got? Questions I ask myself, be4 I finally drop. Is it Assassination, two assholes I done shot.
I like this music. Favorite.
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LOVIN' IT!!!!!!!
doesn't feel like it should 6 min. given how repetitive is it though.
Other than that your style is dope.
Check me out.
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What do you use to say your name at the beginning lol haha
good job bro
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It's a good track the sythn roll loop is a little to loud the strings and the sythn roll need to be about the same volume but everything else is good
If you every want to work one somethin shoot me a holla have you check out my latest track I used one of Estae's Acapellas
Peace bro
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good work though bro
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Just sequence your song better and and transition sounds to set apart different parts of the song intro etc......
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and it would be better if you make the beat like,
intro or direct part1 , hook(refrain), part2, maybe a bridge, hook(refrain), part3 or endsequence if you know what im talkin' about.
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