If I may, i have a bit of feedback to share. I hope you are open to that and see it as a helping matter rather then a judging one.
- 0:45, I would add a FX like a drop or impact there. There is a small one but its more of a percussion to me. Which seems missing power. When people listen and do not look at the waveform (that is how we should review a track IMO), then it sounds like a exciting buildup but without an actual drop following up. It feels a bit like if your girlfriends makes you exciting for some sexy time and then leaves all in a sudden for a ladies night with her girlfriends. LOL
- 4:01, Is that another kick popping up? Or is the kick's volume or gain through a plugin that is rising? Not 100% what is it but I do notice that the kick is being flattened in the track at most parts. A side-chain would work.
- Personally, but that is of course up to you, I do honestly not feel a great match between the actual lead and the rest of the track as it is now. I think the reason might be that it is (made) to wide and the reverb on it also helps with that. Just a extra thought I wanted to share.
Keep it up man. This is deff a nice track already!
- Wobbin
i appreciate your feedback...its really useful
when i made this track i was in the Faculty of Engineering exams and i rushed in to finish the track..so its not the best but i think he gain more than 8000 plays on soundcloud because the idea if the track
thank u again for the feedback :)
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Thank you very much ^•^
Let me know when u upload it.
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It's really perfect, the only track I could find here
just mention me in the video description and send the to me if u can...
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If I may, i have a bit of feedback to share. I hope you are open to that and see it as a helping matter rather then a judging one.
- 0:45, I would add a FX like a drop or impact there. There is a small one but its more of a percussion to me. Which seems missing power. When people listen and do not look at the waveform (that is how we should review a track IMO), then it sounds like a exciting buildup but without an actual drop following up. It feels a bit like if your girlfriends makes you exciting for some sexy time and then leaves all in a sudden for a ladies night with her girlfriends. LOL
- 4:01, Is that another kick popping up? Or is the kick's volume or gain through a plugin that is rising? Not 100% what is it but I do notice that the kick is being flattened in the track at most parts. A side-chain would work.
- Personally, but that is of course up to you, I do honestly not feel a great match between the actual lead and the rest of the track as it is now. I think the reason might be that it is (made) to wide and the reverb on it also helps with that. Just a extra thought I wanted to share.
Keep it up man. This is deff a nice track already!
- Wobbin
when i made this track i was in the Faculty of Engineering exams and i rushed in to finish the track..so its not the best but i think he gain more than 8000 plays on soundcloud because the idea if the track
thank u again for the feedback :)