SubliminalTwin

not bad for your first attempt, not bad at all :)
i really enjoyed it, and i love the title you gave it.
you composed this piece very well as it really feels as though you are just cruising!

well done :)
Butcha

A nice, subtle build, gradual layering. This contributes to a nice balance between keeping the energy moving forward and the mix getting too repetitive and stagnant. I especially like the undertones of sub-divided rhythms as the song progresses. You might look toward building excitement a little bit more with your choices of loops, but that depends on what you're after. Kudos!

OMG this is totally awesome for a first track. Hell, I wish my first track sounded half as good as this. You have an ear for putting loops and sounds together. Excellent stereo balance and wow, this track never falls into a rut. You keep things mixed up and changing. A+ for the Theme and variation work. This one is going on my Favs and I'm going to keep on the look out for more of your work. Great track. :-)

First track? Props. My first track sounded like...well, nothing like this. If Timabaland was a member of the Beatles, he probably would've made music like this after meeting the Maharishi. This is ethnic booty funk. Straight up.

I'm with E, the sounds blend in nicely. If anything, you may just wanna listen to see what sounds you personally would prefer to be in the forefront and which ones are supporting, but that's nothing more really than a panning adjustment. As far as levels go, it's great.

Looking forward to more music. Cheers.