jonzie008

for a first attempt this is really good. I do think it sounded a bit rigid and could do with an injection of funk. Z

Sweet! It actually has a nice sound to it. The way you processed it through Reaper was a nice touch. Very quaint and warm sounding. Sounds like that app is a nice tool to use for those sudden bursts of inspiration.

Awesome! This has a very Deep Tech sound to it. You nailed this tune like a pro. This is one of your best works yet! Great job! I like the progressions! Any House, or Techno DJ could work this fine tune into any of their sets. I know I would If I were a DJ.

Jonez this like one of them four-tiered wurlitzers equipped with AI - awesome, man - a true sound of adventure and fun - centered - much respect

Cool jam mate and I dig the way ya made this a longer mix (seems like not alotta folks are keen on making something go past 5 mins these days). As for the repetitiveness of the track, you can solve that easily by adding in some breaks, or cutting up yer samples, or dropping stuff out (to let other parts play iso'd, like play the bass for a minute drop it out for 10-20 seconds, bring it back & drop out something else a few seconds later, like say, the drums for 5-10 seconds). Beyond that this is a pretty solid composition mate. Keep bangin on!

yes defiantly a Chill out track ! BUT what a beauty full track ( loved it ).

echo John and Dan - man the rhythm bed here is subtle and incredibly nuanced - all sounds just meld perfectly - great music, man - respect

Everything I write here is that ultimately, you got a very sophisticated music. A good time, style of atmosphere that I enjoy.

Dan

Great track, my friend, probably more chill out than ambient, but who cares :-)

Keep them coming

John

This has got to be one of my favorites. You are definitely a good songwriter. The simplicity makes it so easy to appreciate such beauty when you hear it. Your vocals are nice and smooth. This song creates a laid back and relaxed atmosphere. Good Job Bro!

Tddj

a chilled haunted cinematic track, i love the soft touches in this track, it transformes and transformes until you get there where you want to be.
Great job

what a great great track. This is an abosulte superb track that gives you the high atmospheres that this track deserves.
Great job

btw i forgot to mention itd b nice to find sum1 who actually knows where to put their drops if you kno how to count bars its however long intro & outro you want with 8bar hooks & 16bar verses if you can come up with sum id really appreciate it & give full credit on the ones i use thanks

not a bad beat but im glad u admit you dont kno what a dirty south beat is supposed to sound like. unfortunatly for u no1 really knows a dirty south style on this site so all the "dirty south loops" are more of an east coast style but i cant find a better 1 yet. im born and raised in texas so im here to tell you hard bass line with a gangsta sounding background. now i know alot of the music comin from the south is sum lolipop crap but thats not how it started every1 wants dance songs to hit the radio. if you want a good example the only true dirty south beat i heard on this site is from c. shatner "come to get ya" if you go to my page i used it for a track called "down in texas mayne" but if you can come up with sum good southern beats ill use em i been lookin hard if you like southside rap you should check out mt page im bout to check out some more of yours.

great acoustic song, your voice is suttle but the message will be out there, your voice has a kind of finess tambre that i like.
nice work in here.

hello, jonzie - a genuine gem - perfect on all levels - i love the gtr sounds and yr vox and lyrics are forthright and right on

Sometimes, simplicity is enough to for send a message. Excellent for me ....

Dan

Beautiful song with a great vocal performance. Great melody and tempo. Fav.

Cool deal! This is a nice change for you. I'm not familiar with what the dirty south is supposed to sound like either. I think you did an awesome job of arranging and mixing this track. I like all of the different effects that come and go. Great use of the stereo field. Those are some fantastic loops to work with. This song doesn't sound like anything I've heard before. I also feel that this would be great for a motion picture soundtrack. Maximum props to ya bro.

Tddj

Very nicely done ! i my self as i was listening had some ideas for this song let me nkow if you're interested, take care my friend.

Nice track, the quality isn't bad for what you recorded on, great voice and lyrics, I really like the laid back feel to this. going to fav it, good stuff man, keep it up.

Wonderful cinematic piece, my friend, very image evoking. Enjoyed listening.

All The Best

John

AWSOME!
Soo deep it will be cool for some kind of movie!
big + for the sound quality impresive
\downloading :-)

Well conceived and well executed. The track is wonderful. Loved every second. Would also make for a great cinematic piece.

Well DOne

John

I guess you could call it Ambient Tech if you wanted. It's been a while since I've heard this track. It has some nice flow to it. I like how it breaks down around 2:40 with just the drum and bass and then it goes into a harder more tech sound. This is really a sweet sounding tune It has a little bit of everything all rolled up into one. This is an oldie but a goodie!

Cheers,
Tddj