Daichi0150

Hey

Like this track, the diff elements that you have in it to make it, work very nice together,little trippy and dance mixed together nice touch,hey like your break wow did not see that coming brilliant...overall very interesting and nice piece..nicely done...Thanks...Peace...

Estefano

cool loopin dude.

This is the imagery I get listening to this track. Imagine the scene I described and think of this as the soundtrack for the scene.

The Terminator is beaten and nearly knocked ouut of existence. He drags his bad leg determinedly along as he moves with great effort down the dark street. Up ahead it is a carnival with a merry-go-round. As he drags himself afoot to the railing, he looks about. Teenagers and youngsters alike look at him and wonder what his problem is. There is a stop-motion moment when the music continues but the action freezes and the tension is so thick you can feel it. Fade to black.

Is that my siren loop at the beginning?

it seems very disjointed but definatley has a metal quality about it.

Ahhgh! the samples clash very badly!

This is very tripped out and cool. I like some of the synthesis you've got going on. I think to solve the "too much going on" issue others mentioned, so simple EQ'ing could work wonders. You know cut a frequency of one sound, so that another can come through more. Overall nice work!

good effort for ya first. at times the song hits a few points that are touching on genius, but i would be carefull about key clashes. maybe a little too much happening at once sometimes. keep going tho, u have good potential in my eyes
Hunta

Not bad at all there are parts of the song where there seems to be too much going on. There is a wall of sound that is built by the collision of all of the different tracks playing at once. But that may have been your intention. Nice creation. It's not always plesant to the ears, but it seems to have a little bit of everything added to it. Keep on mix'n