Oh I already deleted them ^^ it was horrible really. I'm a passionated piano, synth, drums, and bass player. but I can't sing ^^ and that's okay. I can show you the lyrics though. are you a singer? :)
verse:
when you left me i couldnt see
how your leaving would cruzify me
i was dreaming of another life
i believed in you as my wife
now im broken cant u hear
my heart breaking in pain and tears
you have taken my light away
and all my colors have turned to grey
refrain:
and evry day it's gonna rain rain rain raiin
but it can't wash away my pain pain pain paiin
I can't be happy again gain gain gain
evry day plays out the same yeah wohoo
Great track, all the right things in all the right places.
All I could critique was. Sounds get a little samey by the second drop so some sort of switch up in either the main riff or an extra leed sound, white noise sound etc.. would help differentiate the second drop from the first and built the energy up without having to do too much work.
It's alright for EDM, although I generally dislike the whole idea of EDM. I would not call it house in any way though. The arrangement seems okay. The whole thing has very little dynamics though, as if it is over compressed, over limited, or both. You have plenty of headroom, so ease off on the thresholds! Every instrument seems like it's at the same volume with this much "smashing." It could be better, but of course it could be far worse!
well EDM is not a genre more a description for some genres and styles of big party music. like "bigroom" i hate the idea of inventing new words makin it a "genre". but anyways I've spent 2 hours on that only more like a boredom project and mind the bad apple standard headphones i used to master it cz my speakers were in repair i know it's very bad mastered and u can't call it compression ^^ but i think it's quite good for the equipment circumstances I had at this time. you seem to have a lot of experience so I'm glad you took a listen on my track tho :) stay tuned man
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verse:
when you left me i couldnt see
how your leaving would cruzify me
i was dreaming of another life
i believed in you as my wife
now im broken cant u hear
my heart breaking in pain and tears
you have taken my light away
and all my colors have turned to grey
refrain:
and evry day it's gonna rain rain rain raiin
but it can't wash away my pain pain pain paiin
I can't be happy again gain gain gain
evry day plays out the same yeah wohoo
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All I could critique was. Sounds get a little samey by the second drop so some sort of switch up in either the main riff or an extra leed sound, white noise sound etc.. would help differentiate the second drop from the first and built the energy up without having to do too much work.
Thanks for sharing.
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I like the logo as well.
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