Yttrium

So much emotion in this one...

Beautiful song!

Slow yet calming with a hint of sadness.
Very awesome for self taught!

a lovely impressionistic theme with equally lovely developments - a very rewarding listen!

Good track!
Nice sound

Amazing! Can't wait to hear the rest :)

GREAT STUFF MAN ! I would love to throw some vocals on this.

Great track you guys wrote!! The vocals are very good, even though the quality is not what you want it is still pretty good and I love the words and everything about this track. Really good job and keep up the great song writing. Good job again!!!!

absolutely gorgeous!! amazing job :DDD

I read the info and had to listen! There's something about real instruments, and the whole jam atmosphere, thats missing on the loop (due to the nature of the beast). I'm glad I listened... Great job! I can tell you recorded it at church, but the sound quality is good. Guys, keep it up and stay focused! Anytime you try to do something to further the Kingdom there will be things that happen... that try to turn you away. Watch for them closely. Peace

I hope everything went well with your girlfriend.

The track is beautiful, my friend. Thoroughly enjoyed listening to it and would happily do so many, many times.

A definite fav

John

Good track man, very long but good, good lyrics as well, keep it up man.

Sounds great, my friend, I just wish it was longer.

Much Enjoyed

John

Very very nicely done. In my eyes, the lower quality made the singers voice pop over the drums. is you just took out the buzz, and made sound a little louder, it would sound really amazing.

Great job :D

With an epic like this, I can't wait to hear the rest of what's coming. The track is great, my friend, simple as that.

Faved

John

Interesting and really beautiful song :)

Lot's of tension in it and quite emotional.

Keep on doing stuff like that :)

Good quality to this track considering how you recorded this, and good track as well. I like the vocals. Keep it up man

Cool as man, we have similar ideas!
What were you running for the strings?
Epic

Beautiful use of those lyrics. Ive been trying and failing to do so myself so good job and thinks for the amazing epic of a song.

nice. great effects and samples, like it a lot
unfortunately my op wasnt as easy. i had complications and my 20 minute surgery ran for three hours and i had to be awoken and then local anesthetic so i felt and saw whole thing, then was back in for another 5 days with an infection....my soundtrack would sound more like a horror movie theme!!!
good work!

I listened twice so I could give a more accurate critique. I like parts of the track. I think the transitions should be more gradual and that each section of the track longer. As it is, it sort of jumps abruptly (in ambient terms). I love the heavily compressed slowed down snare sound near the start. I'm not a fan of the artist guiding us as to what the journey should be like. I think with ambient works u should let the listener decide/ imagine what the journey is about. The end part sounds great but is ridiculously short. That mood can be repeated for a long time before it would become boring. Check out Brian Eno Ambient 1.

Nice job... very soundtrack like!

Cool track, loved the music and the guitar work, real nice job

i cant wait to hear what vocals are put on this piece. something this solid as an instrumenal is going to kill with the right vocals. youve got some great tempo switches thru out...my fav being the lil gallop skip in the middle of the piece. the guitar work is beyond solid and the drums are wonderful.
really great piece...kudos!

i love this man. reminds me of a soundtrack.