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I like the feel of that jam, it makes me think of the country. Definitely stepped outside the key a few time with the lead but other than that it's pretty cool. Put some vocals on it!

Reminds me of GG Allin's country blues album, david allen coe's penitentiary blues. did ur woman come back? If so what did she reckon?

to be fair, the singing especially is a bit terrible, i feel for what ur singing about tho

coney iz right bruh, ther4es a few off keys and stumbles, its not a race man, uve got a really good idea for a track here so if u got the commitment just keep recording till u got it right bro

I really like this, it's got a chill vibe. Don't worry about a few mistakes, you still pulled it off nicely. Good work!

Love that blues riff partner. Nice.

Honestly I think you hould re record the lead part. You messed up quite a few times. I say keep recording till you hit it right. I know it sucks sometimes cause its like freestyle soloing sorta like freestyle rapping. Sometimes you just cant remember what you just ripped. You just gotta listen and play along with what you have recorded till you get it memorized and are able to re record it quality like. Sometimes I find when I do this myself I end up seeing a way to make the lead better.