KnightHeir

très bon son! le break a 1:20 n'est pas super bien placé mais à priori tu dis que c'est juste pour tester ton nouveau "home studio" et sérieux, si tu as fait ça en une seule prise, moi je dis bravo! j'aime beaucoup ton travail habituellement et ce "rush" n'est absolument pas décevant bien au contraire, je dirai même qu'il est prometteur si une version définitive est envisagée?

en tous les cas, du très très bon son!
Bleep

great..just some reverb would make the vocal blend better with the beat ...good track

You killed this, man. Great job. Lyrics and flow are tight as well as the beat.

Beat ans vocal r great! Well done man!

Beat ans vocal r great! Well done man!

This flow man, I feel this entire vibes, check your email man, lets get it

I'm simply giving my opinion about the track, the mixing and mastering is great with no doubt, but I'm giving my musical opinion. Don't be butthurt lmao.

absolutely sick.

Kinda a stale flow, can be much more catchy. The writing is bland. But the beat, that shit is pretty heat fam. Although the one note does get a little over used, try adding more variation there.

H!ly damn , nice 1!

I gotta admit that it reached my heart. keep working

this is a hard trap..i will say the vocal could have been better,,but the energy is lit .my man

What everybody else said above. Use this if you get stuck for different syllables to spit.
https://www.rhymezone.com/

Smoked a fat one and stood up right when I heard this.

sounded solid af. beat is dope. one thing the vox where a lil dry and over powering. maybe bring them into the mix a bit more with some reverb or something. get them to sit in there just right and you got a solid track here

yo.. this beat and rapper is dope! you bring me back to the old school days but with a modern feel to it.

I like the message and wisdom you are sharing with others through your track, well done and keep em coming i'll be watching you..

Peace

Maaan, I really dig this.

Awesome beat bro! Keep it up. Love the flow.

Hot track! im big on listening to the words of a song and i must say your word play is on level, great job on this track.

Sounds like Eminem

Pretty Dope Format...! Keep it up!

my bad .. its leakin greatness // keep grindin

its l

Nice!!! clear vocals no mumbling love it. super clean!

Really like your flow here with the lyrics. It's pretty unique and goes well with the reverb synths you used...

The snare is something in between a modern trap snare and a vintage hip-hop snare ahah I love it tho. Keep up the good work!

-Zivøn

Finally Something lyrical keep it up mate