KnightHeir

wow, very cool track !!

u flow like water. amzing!

Good beat and good rapping, can't go wrong with both. Good job!

Fire stuff

Hot!!! wicked flow my friend, it has substance and the beat is flaming as well, awesome work format, im loving this one forsure. Larry

vibing song

Sick Beat, exceptional lyricism. Thanks for sharing!

nicebro

Well done !
Maybe 2 points for me to improve a little :
- too much "SS" in the voice maybe, but that don't hurt so it's ok.
- more sync the flow with rhythm

Again man, you have a really unique flow. I agree with Audioendo's critique on the De Esser, the S's are over sharp on my monitor headphones. Only other complaint I can give was the "Yo the earth is on an axis it don't spin backwards." Seemed like a kinda cheesy line. Other then that, great track, Plaeczka123 killed this beat, props to him. You killed that flow and all the other lyrics. And your mixing/mastering is pretty on point. IS THAT ALBUM OUT YET?

dope song

straight up fire

Hope I enjoy? Too late* Can you imagine this on a Personal Trainer ad?? I sure can

sick bro..smashed the beat up

This is dope bro. Nice heavy lyrics.. always a plus. It's mixed pretty well. Also, I feel like your voice could be emphasized a bit more, with emotion. You have a great rap voice, and I think it would be cool to hear you go a bit harder on the vocals, more raw. Either way, keep it up man.

not my favorite kind of music , but this is really a good one.
lyrics are exactly on the beat , this at least how I recognize it.
I would like some extra thrill in the hook adding more vocals , not only "i am focussed" . Overall great track.

complete fire.
just vocal you need to prioritize more

Nice. I like it.

Ok. So dont take anything as a negative as I am a very critical listener. Plus, I feel as if the goal is to uplift folks. Comments are just people’s personal opinions and preferences.

1. So the main thing that sticks out is that the vocal really needs a De-eser. The siblence in your “s’s“ and “t’s“ seem pretty harsh.

2. The choruses or hook as they say seem really straight up and simple. Personally, I’d try to play with some pan and/or delay automation. Maybe not in the first one if you want to keep it straight up, but perhaps the second.

Overall, good work bud.

A club banger.

You managed a great post production process, I really like the overall sound ;)

Dope. Have you changed the pitch tho?

is very good man

wow starts so fast and just keeps going

Very nice