Ok. So dont take anything as a negative as I am a very critical listener. Plus, I feel as if the goal is to uplift folks. Comments are just people’s personal opinions and preferences.
1. So the main thing that sticks out is that the vocal really needs a De-eser. The siblence in your “s’s“ and “t’s“ seem pretty harsh.
2. The choruses or hook as they say seem really straight up and simple. Personally, I’d try to play with some pan and/or delay automation. Maybe not in the first one if you want to keep it straight up, but perhaps the second.
This is tight. Your flow is impeccable. There are some battles happening with the beat in certain sections but nothing that doesn't seem over the top or unfix-able. Nice work!
How can we help as a community? I produce, write and engineer and I would be willing to dedicate some time to helping bring your art to the world. Need more hip hop with flows and rhyme scheme.
First, thank you for listening and commenting. Although publicity will be a factor later, knowledgeable technical critiques is what im after. Im not a proffesional, but i want proffesional sound for the music i love to make.
Ik we ain't exactly buddies but, I can't knock that THIS is extremely unique and different. Your flow seems slightly off beat but its not too much of an issue, it kinda fits the really odd rhythm. I can't even begin to say how dope this beat is, so I give you props man. Can't wait to hear the album.
Ahhh I see you are learning to read the description first so you can give relevant feedback lol. No hard feelings and yes, this time I did put work in on this track although it still is a "rough draft." The offbeat cadence was what I was going for on this one as I feel it's what the track called for in the spirit of originality and quirkiness. Thanks for stopping by and listening. Keep creating.
1. Seems you need a De-esser on your vocal as there is a lot of sibilance.
2. The flow is good for sure, but I feel like the business of the drums (maybe a mix thing) takes away from the smoothness of the vocal.
on Focused Prod by Paleczka123 by Art0fficial
on Focused Prod by Paleczka123 by Art0fficial
1. So the main thing that sticks out is that the vocal really needs a De-eser. The siblence in your “s’s“ and “t’s“ seem pretty harsh.
2. The choruses or hook as they say seem really straight up and simple. Personally, I’d try to play with some pan and/or delay automation. Maybe not in the first one if you want to keep it straight up, but perhaps the second.
Overall, good work bud.
on Focused Prod by Paleczka123 by Art0fficial
on Focused Prod by Paleczka123 by Art0fficial
on Focused Prod by Paleczka123 by Art0fficial
on Focused Prod by Paleczka123 by Art0fficial
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on Easyy by Art0fficial
on Easyy by Art0fficial
on Easyy by Art0fficial
How can we help as a community? I produce, write and engineer and I would be willing to dedicate some time to helping bring your art to the world. Need more hip hop with flows and rhyme scheme.
on Easyy by Art0fficial
on Easyy by Art0fficial
on Easyy by Art0fficial
on Easyy by Art0fficial
on Easyy by Art0fficial
on Easyy by Art0fficial
on Easyy by Art0fficial
on Easyy by Art0fficial
on Easyy by Art0fficial
on Easyy by Art0fficial
on Easyy by Art0fficial
on Easyy by Art0fficial
on Easyy by Art0fficial
on Easyy by Art0fficial
1. Seems you need a De-esser on your vocal as there is a lot of sibilance.
2. The flow is good for sure, but I feel like the business of the drums (maybe a mix thing) takes away from the smoothness of the vocal.
Just a couple thoughts!