I think MG you should promote your country while promoting your music. A lot of people in the west don't give a damn about nuking such a desert dust hole. Seriously it's how the media depict Iran. I am forever showing people Google images of the streets of Tehran and the women and the snow capped mountains. All the best to you whatever you decide MG.
Streets of tehran ... Crowded city and so big . But I'm in neyshabur , the capital of culture and poetry in iran ... Right now , we have a heavy wind and rain in the summer !!!
I really like this. Capture's innocence in a spectacular way. Hope and the future. I would love to add some percussive elements when the massive chorus hits. Maybe a guitar melodic line. I love this song though. Awesome work
Cru
Hey cru ... I'm really happy that you like it ... you are right . It must be more progressive and massive ... Guitar is good idea . Yeah good ... I'll check it ... thanks and hanshake
I sometimes watch a kids thing called in the night garden with one of my grandchildren and the scenes from it came instantly to mind with this ... brilliant tv stuff. That is not a put down as some people seem to think when you put their music in the bracket of kids things ... some very very creative stuff going on there to capture those young minds .... and their grandpa.
Hey man, great tune!....you definitely hit the happy side of the street with this one, the gated vocals are fantastic! I was really digging the synth playing but then the track ended! haha..very reminiscent of some classy Japanese pop music I've heard but with more complexity and feeling...cool stuff man!
cheers Dave :)
Nice chilled vibes there...tropical drums are just in place.
Well,as you suggest, i would prefer an acoustic/country version more (just my preference). The chopped vocals could be a little downtoned tho...and piano should be given some more time.
Thanks
TJ
Four days ago , I heard a r&b song see you again from wiz khalifa and charlie puth ... It made me cry . I love paul walker so much , then I started to make half-acoustic version with my guitar and tahmina helped me a lot . If I can , so Ill upload it
This has some quite pretty melodies and gentle playful sound that's also kind of like pop music, partly because of the pitchshifted vocals, which make me think of music for young children. That last point is not necessarily a criticism.
Guitar has a decent recorded sound and plays some pleasant chords and the timing is fine.
0:48 I think you could do with a cymbal or some other hit as that's when the first main groove enters so needs more punctuation.
Piano then seems a bit too quiet.
This actually has a bit of a tropical chill feel to it.
2:24 a little solo consisting of two different synths. More tropical stuff again and then it's pleasantly over.
Thanks man ... its helpful . I wrote the base melody when I was ten and now im 17 after 7 years... I am agree with you. Its kids stuff :) . Because the pitch guide my mind to little girl shouting ... my coming sister will like it i think ... again thank and my pleasure 2 you
I was just wondering why the track has low volume... i like the track but the volume is quite low. Anyways, even with low volume I will still fav the track :)
Fuckin LOVE shit like this! Volume gets too low before the drop, you should try a phaser effect instead of trying to ascend the volume. But overall I really dig the sounds!
Musically it's cool and very 'smiley' if you know what I mean...uplifting, yeah...technically the advices are below in the comments...(wasn't able to pump up the volume, cause it came to be very noisy and massy..)
Ozone is excellent for mastering (and limiting) MG...but too much limiting gives you those flat edges on your mix (wav graphic)..just some compression first...then soft limiting so that the mix has room to breathe and the instruments have all the dynamics...you are close...just less loud/limiting is fine...if you listen to your mix on your MP3 player..and then a commercial/radio mix of a song you like, you will likely find that the radio song is a bit quieter...It also helps to use what is called a soft knee limiter so that the sound is gradually limited....others may not agree with me, but I would rather hear the good quality instead of the loudness...on the quieter spots (drops) just automate your fader/volume to bring it up a bit....keep doing your music...its always fun and don`t worry too much about the technical things...our friends here on LM just try to help when they can offer some input....cheers....Ed
nice upbeat track MG...it is happy listening over here in Western Canada....well done...I see you have some comments on the production...I agree...a little less limiting on the main sections...and a bit more volume on the drops would make it even better...but it is already very good...leaves a smile....Ed
Everyone already said what I intended to say, so I can only admire your work and with the improvements mentioned being made, this song would be absolutely awesome! Starts off strong and just needs a few fixes here and there :)
Fantastic! Such a great summer-y sounding song. Chill yet upbeat at the same time. Absolutely wonderful! have to agree that it's a tad loud. But I can't really comment cause I'm pretty shit at mastering and whatnot. But still a great song nonetheless.
Hey, I like the tropical feel. 1:14 seems out of place beat wise and I think it's the gain difference. Also the drops are way too prevalent. Don't get me wrong I liked what you did, but the mastering is so disparate that It made the track sound disjointed in parts. I remember doing something equivalent on my tune
"Dancing with the war drums" when I went to a quiet piano part. I had to totally remix that after everyone explained that it was too much of a contrast. But this is a cool tune so keep at it my friend.
Cru
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A happy sunny good vibe feel.
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cheers Dave :)
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.she's at the top of the list
.a botanist
.softer than a flower petal is
.or cotton tips
.I'm planting seed in the soil
.im gardening
.add a little more right here
.this part is thin...
Keep it up!
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Well,as you suggest, i would prefer an acoustic/country version more (just my preference). The chopped vocals could be a little downtoned tho...and piano should be given some more time.
Thanks
TJ
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Personally i would make the guitar wet. Ohterwise this is a nice track, as mentioned above i feel like a tropical house theme over this song :).
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This has some quite pretty melodies and gentle playful sound that's also kind of like pop music, partly because of the pitchshifted vocals, which make me think of music for young children. That last point is not necessarily a criticism.
Guitar has a decent recorded sound and plays some pleasant chords and the timing is fine.
0:48 I think you could do with a cymbal or some other hit as that's when the first main groove enters so needs more punctuation.
Piano then seems a bit too quiet.
This actually has a bit of a tropical chill feel to it.
2:24 a little solo consisting of two different synths. More tropical stuff again and then it's pleasantly over.
Congrats.
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"Dancing with the war drums" when I went to a quiet piano part. I had to totally remix that after everyone explained that it was too much of a contrast. But this is a cool tune so keep at it my friend.
Cru