Very nice production. Love the combination of the chosen synths. Very dreamy atmosphere you created. The guitar is put in very well into the mix aswell. The drop really gets you going!
I think it's my best mastering till now ... It's about my thoughts ... about heaven ... it came from deep , from soul ... but I'm very hurrier , very very heavier
Happy you like synths ... Wish and peace , MG
Great intro, track sounds very clear through headset, you playing the guitar? sounds great in the mix, definitely could fit under dance genre as it wants to make you tap your feet along with the track, nice transitions and arrangement, keeping it very interesting for the listener, will check out more of your tunes after hearing this great piece of work that's for sure, afarin Peace n Respect dada... mosaic...
glad to have had hear this wonderful piece. gonna be paying a lot more attention to you from now on that's for sure. thank you for sharing and congrats on the outcome. stay blessed much love -EazyBeatz :)
I think MG you should promote your country while promoting your music. A lot of people in the west don't give a damn about nuking such a desert dust hole. Seriously it's how the media depict Iran. I am forever showing people Google images of the streets of Tehran and the women and the snow capped mountains. All the best to you whatever you decide MG.
Streets of tehran ... Crowded city and so big . But I'm in neyshabur , the capital of culture and poetry in iran ... Right now , we have a heavy wind and rain in the summer !!!
I really like this. Capture's innocence in a spectacular way. Hope and the future. I would love to add some percussive elements when the massive chorus hits. Maybe a guitar melodic line. I love this song though. Awesome work
Cru
Hey cru ... I'm really happy that you like it ... you are right . It must be more progressive and massive ... Guitar is good idea . Yeah good ... I'll check it ... thanks and hanshake
I sometimes watch a kids thing called in the night garden with one of my grandchildren and the scenes from it came instantly to mind with this ... brilliant tv stuff. That is not a put down as some people seem to think when you put their music in the bracket of kids things ... some very very creative stuff going on there to capture those young minds .... and their grandpa.
Hey man, great tune!....you definitely hit the happy side of the street with this one, the gated vocals are fantastic! I was really digging the synth playing but then the track ended! haha..very reminiscent of some classy Japanese pop music I've heard but with more complexity and feeling...cool stuff man!
cheers Dave :)
Nice chilled vibes there...tropical drums are just in place.
Well,as you suggest, i would prefer an acoustic/country version more (just my preference). The chopped vocals could be a little downtoned tho...and piano should be given some more time.
Thanks
TJ
Four days ago , I heard a r&b song see you again from wiz khalifa and charlie puth ... It made me cry . I love paul walker so much , then I started to make half-acoustic version with my guitar and tahmina helped me a lot . If I can , so Ill upload it
This has some quite pretty melodies and gentle playful sound that's also kind of like pop music, partly because of the pitchshifted vocals, which make me think of music for young children. That last point is not necessarily a criticism.
Guitar has a decent recorded sound and plays some pleasant chords and the timing is fine.
0:48 I think you could do with a cymbal or some other hit as that's when the first main groove enters so needs more punctuation.
Piano then seems a bit too quiet.
This actually has a bit of a tropical chill feel to it.
2:24 a little solo consisting of two different synths. More tropical stuff again and then it's pleasantly over.
Thanks man ... its helpful . I wrote the base melody when I was ten and now im 17 after 7 years... I am agree with you. Its kids stuff :) . Because the pitch guide my mind to little girl shouting ... my coming sister will like it i think ... again thank and my pleasure 2 you
I was just wondering why the track has low volume... i like the track but the volume is quite low. Anyways, even with low volume I will still fav the track :)
Musically it's cool and very 'smiley' if you know what I mean...uplifting, yeah...technically the advices are below in the comments...(wasn't able to pump up the volume, cause it came to be very noisy and massy..)
Ozone is excellent for mastering (and limiting) MG...but too much limiting gives you those flat edges on your mix (wav graphic)..just some compression first...then soft limiting so that the mix has room to breathe and the instruments have all the dynamics...you are close...just less loud/limiting is fine...if you listen to your mix on your MP3 player..and then a commercial/radio mix of a song you like, you will likely find that the radio song is a bit quieter...It also helps to use what is called a soft knee limiter so that the sound is gradually limited....others may not agree with me, but I would rather hear the good quality instead of the loudness...on the quieter spots (drops) just automate your fader/volume to bring it up a bit....keep doing your music...its always fun and don`t worry too much about the technical things...our friends here on LM just try to help when they can offer some input....cheers....Ed
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Great intro, track sounds very clear through headset, you playing the guitar? sounds great in the mix, definitely could fit under dance genre as it wants to make you tap your feet along with the track, nice transitions and arrangement, keeping it very interesting for the listener, will check out more of your tunes after hearing this great piece of work that's for sure, afarin Peace n Respect dada... mosaic...
It's my life , music ... all I need and all I think about .
MG , handshake
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A happy sunny good vibe feel.
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Cru
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cheers Dave :)
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.she's at the top of the list
.a botanist
.softer than a flower petal is
.or cotton tips
.I'm planting seed in the soil
.im gardening
.add a little more right here
.this part is thin...
Keep it up!
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Well,as you suggest, i would prefer an acoustic/country version more (just my preference). The chopped vocals could be a little downtoned tho...and piano should be given some more time.
Thanks
TJ
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Personally i would make the guitar wet. Ohterwise this is a nice track, as mentioned above i feel like a tropical house theme over this song :).
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This has some quite pretty melodies and gentle playful sound that's also kind of like pop music, partly because of the pitchshifted vocals, which make me think of music for young children. That last point is not necessarily a criticism.
Guitar has a decent recorded sound and plays some pleasant chords and the timing is fine.
0:48 I think you could do with a cymbal or some other hit as that's when the first main groove enters so needs more punctuation.
Piano then seems a bit too quiet.
This actually has a bit of a tropical chill feel to it.
2:24 a little solo consisting of two different synths. More tropical stuff again and then it's pleasantly over.
Congrats.
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