Well, I don't like to hear Bush unless his words are twisted beyond recognition, but the rest of the song is pretty decent. I was wondering why your songs don't use all the headroom that is available. Like the waveforms are all at a pretty low peaking volume. Might want to work on that, as the headroom is there for a reason. Cool start to a track!
Funny how from one side of their mouth, they want to protect
this Country and out of the other side, of their mouth they
want to start wars all over the world...
Well if you didn't start wars, you wouldn't have to protect the
Country...
The middle east has been robbed, kicked around destroyed by
those 2 sided mouthed people...I think they've had enough I'm
sure if the shoe was on the other foot, you would be thinking
the same way...The way things are going you just may get your
chance...LOL
Musically simple clean and mixed really well...
Thanks for the feed back this track is not intended as a political view but more an interpretation of politics and music combined originally it was JFK but it sounded better with bush and the content of the speech never once came into consideration.
very elegant transition with reverse cymbal into the kick drum section. i like the sustained harmonies. has a very peaceful, spiritual feel. nice inspiration!
It was actually kind of inspiring hearing George Bush words. You have a nice nack for fitting narrative into your tracks. I liked that a lot. Look forward to discovering more of your stuff. peace.
In my opinion, there is a little too much compression to the point of it being hard to hear the organ and drums clearly. Maybe pulling it back just a bit might help a bit with the clarity of the overall mix. I do like that vocal though :P
as it is still to be finished i have noticed that playing it through the laptop does sound different from playing it through headphones and speakers. will defo look at the compression on the final mix and hopefully it sounds clearer
Thanks for the feed back
As it is only a sample i will upload the full song by the weekend just a few things needing finished just so that it has that unique sound that each producer want lmao
thanks for the comments though look out for the full track and others.
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this Country and out of the other side, of their mouth they
want to start wars all over the world...
Well if you didn't start wars, you wouldn't have to protect the
Country...
The middle east has been robbed, kicked around destroyed by
those 2 sided mouthed people...I think they've had enough I'm
sure if the shoe was on the other foot, you would be thinking
the same way...The way things are going you just may get your
chance...LOL
Musically simple clean and mixed really well...
Peace...TG.
Onsie
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Thanks for the comments though
Onsi3
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you gotta amplify the mix after post tho
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Good job.
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Cheers
Onsi3
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Wow, this is brilliant track, very smooth and coherent.
Well done
Jamid
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ER
Thanks for the feed back
Onsi3
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thanks for the comments though look out for the full track and others.
Onsi3
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Onsi3
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Thanks for the feedback
Onsi3
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:)