therapoweredfusion

I like what you have going on here, but the drums sound like they're maxing out and cutting out the rest of the track.

I like what you have written, the vocals have character which is a huge part. You have something playing too loud in your DAW. This will sound really good once it's mixed a bit.

Evan

It sounds like there is some cool things going on but the instruments seem a bit muted and too far in the back ground in my humble opinion. Kinda has a Kills feel for me music wise. Vocals have a bit of Talkin heads vibe to a point.

I would try and clean the mix up a bit, but that is just my 2 cents.

tv