beautiful track, great lyrics and supreme instrumentals..i have to agree with pjb tho..the stereo image as a whole sounds way to flat, it doesn't expand when it needs to expand and compress where it needs to be compressed, its needs dynamics basically, especially in the chrous...my two pennys wud be take this to a professional sound engineer and he/she will make sure the sonical quality of this track is as good as the emotional quality..and then you will have a masterpiece on your hands
Well young lady, this is really nice work...better than nice - your vocals are absolutely flawless. Move over Beyonce/Rhianna/et al, and make room for a real artist!!!!!
I have to agree with Dave, but for different reasons. This would be a fantastic song if it was done with real guitars (I'm not a big fan of the synthesized guitars). I think if this one was done in a studio with real session players it would be a hit record. Something for your collab partner to think about.
Can you imagine how good this could be with Planet on bass, Bilbozo or Rei or AllenV or MackMan or Randy or any other number of great guitar players that are on this site doing the guitar work, and then maybe Buddrumming on drums??????? Ohhh that would be fine.
Anyway, sorry if it seems I'm nitpicking but this one really has major, major potential. It has all of the necessary elements to be a hit record. It would just be fantastic if you and your collab partner could wander into a studio and do it up right.
Great song though, and again, your vocal work is spectacular.
Great track Muzzzzzzzic!....a splendid performance....the backing music,the vocals and whole vibe is really cool.....But!lol I'm putting my studio hat on here so please don't think this is negative, the whole sound needs to be remastered maybe,it's there but hidden under a layer of what sounds like a mastering preset..I'm not hearing the individual dynamics of the instruments enough or your fantastic voice brought to the level it should be.....Don't get me wrong I love the song and the music,but it's not breathing enough on the production side of things....mind you having said all that,it might be that my ears are shot! lol.....I always think there's a risk involved with critiquing or rather someone like myself who isn't a professional studio technician passing judgement.....your a real talent,no dispute....maybe what I'm really saying is you deserve a big production house behind you. :)
absolutely no negativity taken! if you keep telling me my nasty food is good i'm gonna keep put putting a plate of nasty food in front of you to eat. hypothetically speaking, of course. lol.
anyway, i don't think its your ears, just what the fella who sent it had in mind, i suppose.
i will be sure to pass along your thoughts. thanks PJB.
I can't believe I'm early enough to be the first to comment on this upload. of course it's brilliant, love the lyrics and the guitar..harmonies are in the pocket. It sounds like you did some effect on your voice (maybe?). I don't think you should put anything between that beautiful instrument, and the listener's ear.
thanks for the review leahcim. i actually did what i normally do: send along my plain ole dry pellas, and well, the rest is up to my "collab partner[s]". this is what he came up with, but i will be sure to pass along the info.
You've captured the 80's, your writing is tremendous, you're voice a gift from GOD, and I'm grateful to have stumbled across you for a second time......it's a long story!
I agree with everyone else, you shouldnt be on Looperman at all. Youre still a baby with the highest possible vocal talent. Just make sure you remember me when you get to the top, Ill be your body-guard or something. All the best Edwards and enjoy! ;)
Girl you have one amazing vocal, just listen to a track Bear did with one of your pella's, then listened to this, and the vocals have gone up another level, extremely professional vocal, you should be signed if you are not yet, excellent collab with you and Jamie, one of my fav artist here on loop, guess I have another fav now...Stunningly brilliance....Merry Christmas to you too sweet...amazing...Peace n love...elsd...
Ok. I finally figured it out......Peabo Bryson and/or Denise Williams "Feel The Fire". That's what the track reminds me of. You were right. It was something old school. :o)
Now I know I am going to have a Merry Christmas after listening to this tune!! You have some amazing vocal talent and they are displayed to perfection here!! Alway love your harmonies. Peeps this is pure music. X-mas! Filaofsoul
My lord... i told you before but I guess you need reminding, you are an amazing singer... truly blessed, well done! And a big well done to jfw, I would truly be privileged to work with you ma'am.
Hey MzMuzic, You right, misery does love some company. It takes two to have a relationship and somehow one always seems to fall out of the picture. I like how you expressed the feelings one would go through and asking the questions that matter the most. Your voice gave a deeper depth to the emotion of the words and I can imagine the pain you've sent through the speakers. Definitely some old school stuff right here. Back in them days all over again. Thanks for sharing your tune with us. It's good stuff. For that price you sure made it worth much more. Keep holding on. Have Faith. Peace.
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keep it up
samoi08
But I'm working on it, thanks.
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I have to agree with Dave, but for different reasons. This would be a fantastic song if it was done with real guitars (I'm not a big fan of the synthesized guitars). I think if this one was done in a studio with real session players it would be a hit record. Something for your collab partner to think about.
Can you imagine how good this could be with Planet on bass, Bilbozo or Rei or AllenV or MackMan or Randy or any other number of great guitar players that are on this site doing the guitar work, and then maybe Buddrumming on drums??????? Ohhh that would be fine.
Anyway, sorry if it seems I'm nitpicking but this one really has major, major potential. It has all of the necessary elements to be a hit record. It would just be fantastic if you and your collab partner could wander into a studio and do it up right.
Great song though, and again, your vocal work is spectacular.
Happy New Year
Bear
I really want this one to be nitpicked, cuz I definetely think it has potentials, um hm potentials, lol.
Thanks Mr. Bear and happy new year to you too.
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anyway, i don't think its your ears, just what the fella who sent it had in mind, i suppose.
i will be sure to pass along your thoughts. thanks PJB.
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Was fantastic to listen to!
Nameste,
Leahcim
thanks for the review leahcim. i actually did what i normally do: send along my plain ole dry pellas, and well, the rest is up to my "collab partner[s]". this is what he came up with, but i will be sure to pass along the info.
thanks.
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lets see, i have a transportation manager, a couple muzicians, and idunno if i'll need a bodyguard but lets throw one in for good measure :-)
thanks for stopping by ozzi.
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thanks mack man
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am I blind or there's no acapella version of this warm song?
It could be nice to remix it.
Go on this way.
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WOW OH WOW
Girl you have one amazing vocal, just listen to a track Bear did with one of your pella's, then listened to this, and the vocals have gone up another level, extremely professional vocal, you should be signed if you are not yet, excellent collab with you and Jamie, one of my fav artist here on loop, guess I have another fav now...Stunningly brilliance....Merry Christmas to you too sweet...amazing...Peace n love...elsd...
and to you and yours :-)
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i sang that when i used to sing with a band.
hehe.
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Nothing to say but listen ....
I take this opportunity to here to wish you a happy holiday season, for the end year ....
Dan
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Ok. I told you the last time I ran out of words.....still there. LOL.
But, seriously, girl. You rocked this. I'm having a dumb moment here. Why does that track sound so familiar?
when you figure out what it reminds you of, do tell. prob somethinn old skool...thanks!
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You gave it a atmosphere and a fireplace moment.
Great job
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Jamie.
i appreciate your patience and wanting to get the song as good as possible.
and the same to you and yours :-)
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thanks.
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and welcome to the loop, hope you find more to enjoy and and to share.