FullCapicityMuzic

MM4E..this is a great song, and it's obviously a great song. For sure, real instruments are gonna inject some more life into the track. I agree with all the other posters about the mix/mastering. Try this....not to change the song, but learn more about the song you have: take it from BIG to small. You can hear how/where to power up an instrument or a section alot easier when the track is small and quiet to begin with. For me, when a track is already big and intense I fine it hard to hear where the dynamics are making a difference. It's an experiment that will payoff. Once you find tha places where the intensity needs to ramp up in the quiet version, you can then go back to addressing your existing version. TK

beautiful track, great lyrics and supreme instrumentals..i have to agree with pjb tho..the stereo image as a whole sounds way to flat, it doesn't expand when it needs to expand and compress where it needs to be compressed, its needs dynamics basically, especially in the chrous...my two pennys wud be take this to a professional sound engineer and he/she will make sure the sonical quality of this track is as good as the emotional quality..and then you will have a masterpiece on your hands

keep it up
samoi08

Well young lady, this is really nice work...better than nice - your vocals are absolutely flawless. Move over Beyonce/Rhianna/et al, and make room for a real artist!!!!!

I have to agree with Dave, but for different reasons. This would be a fantastic song if it was done with real guitars (I'm not a big fan of the synthesized guitars). I think if this one was done in a studio with real session players it would be a hit record. Something for your collab partner to think about.

Can you imagine how good this could be with Planet on bass, Bilbozo or Rei or AllenV or MackMan or Randy or any other number of great guitar players that are on this site doing the guitar work, and then maybe Buddrumming on drums??????? Ohhh that would be fine.

Anyway, sorry if it seems I'm nitpicking but this one really has major, major potential. It has all of the necessary elements to be a hit record. It would just be fantastic if you and your collab partner could wander into a studio and do it up right.

Great song though, and again, your vocal work is spectacular.

Happy New Year

Bear

Great track Muzzzzzzzic!....a splendid performance....the backing music,the vocals and whole vibe is really cool.....But!lol I'm putting my studio hat on here so please don't think this is negative, the whole sound needs to be remastered maybe,it's there but hidden under a layer of what sounds like a mastering preset..I'm not hearing the individual dynamics of the instruments enough or your fantastic voice brought to the level it should be.....Don't get me wrong I love the song and the music,but it's not breathing enough on the production side of things....mind you having said all that,it might be that my ears are shot! lol.....I always think there's a risk involved with critiquing or rather someone like myself who isn't a professional studio technician passing judgement.....your a real talent,no dispute....maybe what I'm really saying is you deserve a big production house behind you. :)

I can't believe I'm early enough to be the first to comment on this upload. of course it's brilliant, love the lyrics and the guitar..harmonies are in the pocket. It sounds like you did some effect on your voice (maybe?). I don't think you should put anything between that beautiful instrument, and the listener's ear.

Was fantastic to listen to!

Nameste,

Leahcim

Big props love your cover and arrangement

You've captured the 80's, your writing is tremendous, you're voice a gift from GOD, and I'm grateful to have stumbled across you for a second time......it's a long story!

Simply amazing voice love the sound of this, my holidays are now brighter!

This sounds beautiful, its all you...very powerful and meaningful.Love the harmonies of your vocals, only you..

I agree with everyone else, you shouldnt be on Looperman at all. Youre still a baby with the highest possible vocal talent. Just make sure you remember me when you get to the top, Ill be your body-guard or something. All the best Edwards and enjoy! ;)

The track is hot and you did your thing sister. I say no more!!

WOW,is there anything you can't sing? where,s the Christmas CD i will for show go get it. guard the pipes. PEACE. THE MACK MAN OUT.

Beautiful song. A delight to hear something so velvety ... starting with your magnificent voice.

Hi MuzicIzMee,

am I blind or there's no acapella version of this warm song?
It could be nice to remix it.

Go on this way.

Hey Patricia

WOW OH WOW

Girl you have one amazing vocal, just listen to a track Bear did with one of your pella's, then listened to this, and the vocals have gone up another level, extremely professional vocal, you should be signed if you are not yet, excellent collab with you and Jamie, one of my fav artist here on loop, guess I have another fav now...Stunningly brilliance....Merry Christmas to you too sweet...amazing...Peace n love...elsd...

Ok. I finally figured it out......Peabo Bryson and/or Denise Williams "Feel The Fire". That's what the track reminds me of. You were right. It was something old school. :o)

Hello

Nothing to say but listen ....

I take this opportunity to here to wish you a happy holiday season, for the end year ....

Dan

OMGosh!! This is so right! Ol' school R & B for real. Stupid good.

Ok. I told you the last time I ran out of words.....still there. LOL.

But, seriously, girl. You rocked this. I'm having a dumb moment here. Why does that track sound so familiar?

What a lovely lovely up spirit version.
You gave it a atmosphere and a fireplace moment.
Great job

Now I know I am going to have a Merry Christmas after listening to this tune!! You have some amazing vocal talent and they are displayed to perfection here!! Alway love your harmonies. Peeps this is pure music. X-mas! Filaofsoul

Whoa! This is great! Two of my favourite looperpeople jamming on a Christmas tune! Classic!

Great vocals on this Patricia - super job! Wishing you and yours a very merry Christmas.

Jamie.

Yep, you're the Meryl Streep of Looperman. I like the arrrangement as well. I hear fire crackling, and I smell gingerbread baking...yummmmmmm!

My lord... i told you before but I guess you need reminding, you are an amazing singer... truly blessed, well done! And a big well done to jfw, I would truly be privileged to work with you ma'am.

Hey MzMuzic, You right, misery does love some company. It takes two to have a relationship and somehow one always seems to fall out of the picture. I like how you expressed the feelings one would go through and asking the questions that matter the most. Your voice gave a deeper depth to the emotion of the words and I can imagine the pain you've sent through the speakers. Definitely some old school stuff right here. Back in them days all over again. Thanks for sharing your tune with us. It's good stuff. For that price you sure made it worth much more. Keep holding on. Have Faith. Peace.