I like it...very imaginative and I can understand why you gave it the title you did. I disagree about the comment that you didn't need the vocal fx....the track has been well thought out and it all works well. You asked in the forum for someone to do spoken word and I have done a few....whereabouts in the track would you use the spoken word?
Anyway....I'll message you and give you my email and you can send the passage you have in mind. I'll record it and don't worry if you don't use it.
Beautiful, well-pieced track. Personally, I think that you should have used some different drum sounds but you could have been going for a different feel than I was thinking.
great beat, my dude! That drop is so clean and engineered exactly like a big-name future bass song. I love the vox chops, and the melodies to accompany it :]
Overall sounds great. Loved it
This track is a great production. In my opinion, the kick Sounded Good With Its Powerful Feeling, But I Don't Think It Fits With The Beat. The Vocal FX You Used Here And There Don't Really Need To Be In The Beat, But It Still Fits Well & Sounds Good. The Transitions were amazing & really keep me drawn into the beat to want to know what's coming next. Keep putting up more work I'd love to see more tracks from you. Also, if you wouldn't mind checking out my tracks, and leaving some feedback I'd appreciate that.
.cataract smoke
.battle - axe stroke
.thems fighting words dope
.im aiming my scope
.-1 punch k-o to the throat
.plant the flag and
.then stand and deliver you mad?
.mad arrows out the quiver you gasp...
Dope beat homie, keep it up. Liked the drums transitions and the screams.
wow nice hella trill beat love the sounds the builds,drops
the mix was nicely done that kick is smacking hard good stuff mate that reverb on that vocal as it pans and fades out good stuff that was a highlight for me
kindly share some mixing tips
Thanks! I appreciate the feedback. In terms of mixing, I did quite a bit of layering. The kick for example, I wanted it to sound dusty, so I found a hip hop type kick with more of a high end and layered it with a low end kick to give it some punch. Also, use volume levels to choose which parts you want to focus on (for this one the dusty kick was the focus so it was louder). I guess training your ear to what you like and think sounds good is the best tip I can give.
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Anyway....I'll message you and give you my email and you can send the passage you have in mind. I'll record it and don't worry if you don't use it.
-Sheen
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-Sheen
on The Moments That Take Your Breath Away Ft Eshar by sheensheep
-Sheen
on The Moments That Take Your Breath Away Ft Eshar by sheensheep
Overall sounds great. Loved it
-Sheen
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- Billion
-Sheen
on The Moments That Take Your Breath Away Ft Eshar by sheensheep
on The Moments That Take Your Breath Away Ft Eshar by sheensheep
-Sheen
on The Moments That Take Your Breath Away Ft Eshar by sheensheep
.cataract smoke
.battle - axe stroke
.thems fighting words dope
.im aiming my scope
.-1 punch k-o to the throat
.plant the flag and
.then stand and deliver you mad?
.mad arrows out the quiver you gasp...
Dope beat homie, keep it up. Liked the drums transitions and the screams.
Thanks for the feedback. And what screams are you talking about? Like what time?
-Sheen
on The Moments That Take Your Breath Away Ft Eshar by sheensheep
the mix was nicely done that kick is smacking hard good stuff mate that reverb on that vocal as it pans and fades out good stuff that was a highlight for me
kindly share some mixing tips