I'm in agreement with lowering the vocals so that the music can be heard clearer. I love the passion in your flow, and how you switch up your voice so that its melodic in parts and strong on the hook. That's very important in selling your lyrical skill. Great job on this, and on the catchy title.
I agree with HenryPascal. I just had the opposite problem with my vocals, I know if you lower the Vocal and get the sync right, its gonna be off the chain!!
I like the melody on which song is based. I paid attention to the flow, in some parts seems to be unsync. The expanded stereo in the refrain is too fat, fix it. This is one of the rare case in which vocals bury the music in background, usually happens the opposite. Altogether i like it, although is not my favourite style, if you work on volume eq this track would sound better!
For the most part, I'll be echoing what others have mentioned already. I love the lyrics and the message, and the beat is excellent too, though you should keep working on your flow. In addition the vocals also sound very raw.
One thing I would add as a suggestion is to incorporate more interesting vocal rhythms in your songs to keep the listener engaged. Like moving faster at some points or maybe even switching up to 3/4 time. Get creative with it to add something intriguing.
Hey Ernestking78 sorry it took awhile for me to get around to checking out one of your tracks after you checked out one of mine. But I'm so glad I did man, LMAO! Luv that line "Ain't No Pussy Up In Me!" (for real tho),
nice track and I digs yo flo braugh. "If It Ain't About Tha Paper Then Ya Ain't Sayin' Nuthin!" Great Job!
Yo... I'm digging it. Keep working on your flow a bit, but the lyrics are dope, and the message is great. Kinda reminds me of old school rap...like Ice Cube. Nicely done man.
I like the lyrics. i think the vocal timing needs some nudging around to find the rhythm pocket. the pocket in the piano part is great. I would like to hear the vocal timing more connected to that sample timing-wise. break at 2:18 is what's up. the space opens up the track and i can really hear the potential. :D
Hey EK, instant fav this is what I'm talkin' 'bout! I luv tracks like this that turn the focus on the real subject matter and ain't afraid to say it like it is! I have an unfinished track based on the continuous and daily assassinations of our young brothers, sisters and babies "entitled Hands Up Don't Shoot!", if I can somehow get the track finished up we may have to do a colab. Great job on this I am impressed.
This has the properties of being a good track, first the vocals are off the beat,and doesn't sound like much processing has been done to them...Me personally would also pay more attention to the low end of the instrumental clashing with the low end of your vocals..
That's true he didn't do a lot of mixing with the vocals it's almost raw vocals,and yeah I hate if words clash with the beat even if only one time I guess that's why some call it flowing,thanks for giving me your ear I appreciate it
great track you got,the concept is a good message but the only downside in my opinion is that the vocals seem abit out of time with the instrumental in certain parts it sounds like you're out of sync with the 4/4 count ,but dont let that discourage you ,you're on the right track keep it up
Yeah, I like these lyrics a lot. I would like to hear a vocal backing track on the hook to brace it a little. A slightly less hot sound on the main vocals too bc it distorts in some places.
This is a really good song and a tight rap.
Thanks what's a vocal backing track? A dub? I THINK I KNOW what you talking about with the distortion I peeped that 2 so I'm a watch out for that in doing my next song
Tha track is dope fam, really saying something for the world to hear, i love music wit a meassage and you nailed it my friend, the beat is tight and the vocals on point. keep'em coming my friend
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I'm in agreement with lowering the vocals so that the music can be heard clearer. I love the passion in your flow, and how you switch up your voice so that its melodic in parts and strong on the hook. That's very important in selling your lyrical skill. Great job on this, and on the catchy title.
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dope track
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Very nice work I like it.
Well done.
Jamid
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One thing I would add as a suggestion is to incorporate more interesting vocal rhythms in your songs to keep the listener engaged. Like moving faster at some points or maybe even switching up to 3/4 time. Get creative with it to add something intriguing.
Great work, and keep at it!
-Sheen
on my mind on my paper by Ernestking78
nice track and I digs yo flo braugh. "If It Ain't About Tha Paper Then Ya Ain't Sayin' Nuthin!" Great Job!
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The beat is nice.
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This is a really good song and a tight rap.
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