not like me to leave a 2nd review, but I felt i had to. This song is complete. Wouldn't change a thing about the arrangement. However the mix is all that needs a tweak here n there. The kick is slightly too mid range. Needs a bit more bottom end. As does the bass..Maybe a little reverb on those synths too to give them a bigger sound....as with the hats and percs....but just a little not too much. Think that could make all the difference..
I've made it a point to start listening to trance music, as I wish to incoprate it into my own style. Amongst the music I have heard on looperman and commercial releases, you truly have a firm grasp on the style. Very clean with good melody and superior synth work. Very impressive.
Dig the alternative sounding guitar diddy !!! Goez real nice with the syncopated drumkit rhythm !!! Lik'd how "U" introduced different instruments/effxxx into the mix az "U" went along !!! The mix iz a little dry n' "U" might try adding some BaZZ !!! Really creative work !!! Kelley K
Forgive me for the Matrix reference, I am at least 40% Sci-Fi/Fantasy Geek at heart. You have some interesting sounds happening here. A couple thoughts (and please consider that this is only my very subjective opinion.) This track would benefit from a little more varied instrumentation. You have good melodies working, they could use a little extra variety. Also you might consider editing down to the strongest stuff, maybe cut 90 seconds or so to make it really tight. Very good for a first shot. Keep it going and always keep the love in what you do. Peace, Six
I love it mate, very good tune you've made. Very unuual, VERY trippy!! For a first track it as lots potential. Keep up the good work man.
Cheers S.
Ps: I dowloaded it.
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Viz
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Great job mate, keep this up ;)
Grtz
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i hope you will finish it soon , good luck !
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Cheers S.
Ps: I dowloaded it.